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by nelliegirl

person lost child
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
brilliance. More more, that was an excellent chapter and same with the one before it. Sorry I didn't write a reply for it, but it's late, I'm tired, I have school tomorrow and then a school play on top of it, so I'm really busy. Alright? But I still want u to update soon. So more soon please.
person abgel
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i hope you update soon.............update soon pweeze pweeze pweeze pweeze pweeze
person Galadrihm_Star
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOO HOO!!! Kikyo got bitch slapped!!! *victory dance* Go KAGOME and SESS!!! Most awe inspiring chapter!! Keep em comin!!!
person Cassie
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nicely written especially the last paragraph.....She told him off and good fro her..she found someone that she truly loves...Sesshomaru and he loves her too... can't wait for the next chapter your a very good author and please continue with this wonderful story.
person Tallen
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
waz up with you? ur tacking to long on puting out the chaps. and they need to be longer. ok
person snowfall
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Such an awesome chapter. And it was so ruined. I'm going to cry. *sniffle* Sess and Kag's were so sweet on the dance floor. She said she loved him! And she really did mean it! That bitch, Kikyou! I wish Sess had done even more damage. Someone needs to set Inuyasha straight. Prick. Somehow I think he's too thick headed to accept what Kagome had said. On to the next chappie!

Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
person snowfall
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooooooh. That evil, evil Naraku. I long to see Sess show how powerful he is taking that slimeball out. And now, even more reason for Kag's to stay with Sess. I hope they officially mate before the wedding. I wondered if that ring once belonged to his mother. I wonder. Did he already have feelings for her when he gave it to her? This is such a great story.

Thanks,

Snowfall
person Cassie
schedule May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A well written story.....At first Kagome agreeded to marry Sesshomaru to save Inuyasha's company...but later on in the relationship Kagome fell in love with Sesshomaru and he fell in love with her...... A very good story I love it and can't wait for the next cahpter and how will Inuyasha react to find that Kagome is Sesshomaru's finacee... love the story ^________^
person hermionebrowneyes
schedule May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hi again i love the chaps rin so sweat and kikyo a slut you keep it up cant wait till next chapters
person snowfall
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! The suspense! Ewwwww, Kikyou. Awww, Rin is so sweet. And Sess, wow. He's falling for Kagome, hard. Hehehe, Inuyasha missed it. Sango is going to be in some really deep shit now! I feel sorry for Kag's. She thinks it is all going to end badly. What will Inu do when he finds out. You have me on pins and needles!

Thanks,

Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave