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Please, can I have some more? Awesome, but did you know your writing is highly addictive it's just so good. Hope to see more soon.

OMG! You're such a tease, such a tease. Hey! What's with the eyes? He won't be dangerous will he? You've got me on pins and needles!

On a more technincal note, there were quite a few word choice errors. There are many beta's waiting in the wings. Look at the paragraph at the top of this page. There is a url to the new aff beta group. I'm using them for the first time. Believe me, it's a great relief to have another set of eyes watching out for me.

Nevertheless, wonderfully written story and I am so anxious for an update. I lurv this story.

Thanks

Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave

This is SUCH a SWEET story! I love it to bits!!!!!!
You're a very good author incedentaly, and you stuck with the various personalities really well. I especially like it when Kagome decks Kikyo...and then later when Sesshomaru decks Kikyo...I'll probably love it when she dies (I'm assuming you're going to kill her at some point).
Do more lemony stuff. I know Sesshomaru isn't going to fuck her until she begs, or whatever his pride demands, but please make that happen QUICKLY.
My favourite part was at the end of Chapter 45 (or whatever) when he falls asleep thinking about how she said she loved him...heehee

:-)) It's wonderful!

okay, excuse any spelling errors, but it's really late....or early. I dunno, I just know i'nm tired and sleepy and my play is now done, but I had to see if tyou yupdated and glad u did because I needed something to read while waiting to watch Inuyasha,,,,,,since I missed it the first time damn it. Okay? excellent chatper and update soon,.

Awesomeness!!! Love love love!!! I couldn't help but laugh at the whole sleepy sleepy thing. Priceless! Poor Lord Fluffy....he was hoping to get a piece! lol *wicked smirk* You never fail to deliver!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!

I love your story please keep going....

Poor Yasha... He had it coming though..LOL. Thank you for updating. Keep up the good writing.

LOL I can just see Kagome's mom hauling Sess out of Rin's room. And, all the things Kag's was contemplating doing to him. That was funny. I wonder if Sess thinks Kags really believed that she meant it when she told Inu that she loved Sess. I'm not quite sure about that one myself. Oh, this is going to be difficult, waiting for her to answer for what she said. Such a wonderful story and you do it so well. Thanks you!

Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave

hi again im happy you enjoy my feed back your storyis so great i like the last part where he is trying to get kagomas dress off rin is so sweet i hope all ends well till next time

inyuasha is an ass he dosent deserve her i hope he fine out why she did it and feels bad