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by nelliegirl

person ioke
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome story!! i cant wait to read your next chapter!! until next time!!
person lost child
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well done, bravo. Everything is working out nicely. Keep going
person hermionebrowneyes
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
me again ilove it its geting very steamy in there keep up the good work
person Cassie
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How could u do this..its just too cruel cutting it off like that especially at the part that we have been waiting for "THE SEX SCENE"
@__@ I'm crying here please please update the story and please make the sex scene really hot and steamy.... meaning very explicit details PPPPPLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Deatara
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this story is the best thing in the world, and you are mean on stoping at this point. but i can wait keep up the good work.
person tinkerbell
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was just mean, don't leave us like that =(
person Hanyou Slave
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Adequate! LOL That is good. I loved it. Can't wait for the lime. Off to the next chapter!

Hanyou Slave aka Snowfall
person Hanyou Slave
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You tease! That's all I have to say to you. Humph!

Snowfall
person kitsune55
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you are evil!!!!!! *throws a tomato at you* but here *gives you some pocky* now you have to finish the next two chapters really fast. im in love with your story and ddint join aff until just now. so your my first ever review. yey! well finish your story because its just full of awesomeness.
person Ookami K.
schedule May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey loved the chapters but why would Kagome dream of something like that unless Naraku had a hand in it..... And of course when will the mating begin? Your already at chapter 47 and no real lemons between the two...... I know you want to take it slow making them want one another and I can see that.... Sexual tension and animalistic desire what a combo.... Love it... I can't wait for the next upcoming chapters....