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for At What Price

by nelliegirl

schedule March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this was a great story! Somehow i managed to read the entire thing in one day.
person Megan Consoer
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
person Megan Consoer
schedule August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
person MammaSuz
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, Nelliegirl, I just finished reading your story. It was great! Thanks to my elementary age kid, I have recently become a fan of Inuyasha. "At What Price" is the type of 'tail' (pun intended) that will keep the reader hanging on for the next installment. Now for my critique of you grammer: due to helping with the homework of my teen and pre-teen kids, I had to flinch whenever you used the wrong word. If you want me to help with your grammer contact me at sehedges@comcast.net or just ignore the mother LOL.
person Angel
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this kicked ass...i loved it this story was soooo awesome
person Malitia
schedule January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
d00d! loved ur story but i'm wondering... was that the last chapter?! i wanna see what happens after she has the kids! CMON!!!!
person inuyoukai8
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, gawd that was such a good story! I loved it I tried to read it all in one sitting but people kept bothering me! I finally finished it and I must say that it was seamlessly written, it flowed very well and you kept the story edgy and tense. Thank you for such a great little escape. I hope to see more from you soon
person Ookami K
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
About time thank Kami, I loved it.... I couldn't help but wait for the newest chapter(s) I loved it. Everyone got what they deserved especially Kikyou.... i loved it way to go.... So when are you gonna write a new story?
person Snowfall
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aaaawww. That was sweet. I would like to point out though that some of the words you used were not the correct ones for the content. For instance, desecrated should have been decimated. Desecrated means that something holy or good has been defiled whereas decimated means completely destroyed. There are others too. Other than a little beta work, the chappie was great. Do we get to see a lemon or is the fic over? Huh? Huh? *gives you puppy eyes*

Snowfall
person WhiteRose-Kurama
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was a wicked amazing fic. I threw me for a loop cuz each chappie was short and sweet but not too short. Although Sess seemed a little out of character, this was a great fic over all and it seems that everyone got what they deserved. And the title is befitting the fic as well. So keep up the good work and hopefully we'll see a sequel perhaps in the near future:P