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by Atropa

person Kiranta
schedule March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^_~ Your welcome. Chapter 2 was near perfection as you can get, even when you told it in Inuyasha's & Sango's point of view. I still want Ayame with them, but it won't matter who you choose because I'll still read it.
person christal-chan
schedule March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
what can i say. yet another great one made by you
person Kiranta
schedule March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Knocks self on the head* Made a mistake in my 1st reply. This isn't the 3rd threesome you did involving Inuyasha & Sango, it's really the 7th. You had them with Kagura in 'Are you up for it?', Sesshomaru in 'Massage Parlor', Kouga in 'Let us share', Naraku in 'Two aginst one', Kaze from Final Fantasy Unlimited in 'Cocktail Mix 21', and lastly Kurama from Yu Yu Hakusho in 'Sister Nightfall'. Hopefully you'll now be adding Ayame to the list now with 'Cave secrets' when you get Chapter 3 up. And I did look into those I mention above. I didn't like them, I loooooooved them!
person Fairia13 not signed in
schedule March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I do so LOVE alt pairings and you are a master at your craft! I saw a few spelling/grammatical errors but nothing major and this story is wonderful. Do you have plans for a follow-up, mayhaps involving Miroku/Kagome or Miroku/Kouga? I know you said this was going to turn into a 3-some? Maybe a Mir/Kag/Kou? Either way, I can't wait to see what's next.
person Fairia13 not signed in
schedule March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...And if you're taking suggestions, I reccommend Sango/Inu/Ayame, simply because then I can pester you for a Mir/Kag/Kou sequel! ;-p
person Inu-Shinta
schedule March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have always resented Kagome for the way she uses the rosary against Inuyasha. She will use it whenever he pisses her off, I hate that.
person SchizoxPsycho
schedule March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh yay!! I'm glad to make you happy!!
Anyways I love how you do the different points of views.
It shows how both Sango and Inuyasha feel about each other.
oooh I just love it. What can I say I am your fangirl!!
:D
person Mirror
schedule March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was very good. I like how you handled doing the lemon through point-of-view. I think you should make this a InuYasha/Sango/Ayame because it's never been done (Not that I've seen)... Anyway... Keep up the good work.
person Gentoside
schedule March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow..looks good one of your best yet Atropa...I personaly like Kagura but then Ayame is good too....Hmm...Whatever you pick I'll like so Go for the gold Atropa ^_^
person Sentinel_of_Ganymede
schedule March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Thanks for mentioning me! I really appreciate it! The second chappie to this just ruled. Sango/Inuyasha pairings are the best, but then again, when it comes to hentai, I don't quibble! Please don't keep us waiting!