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by Atropa

person SailorNemesis
schedule April 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed this fic, would like to see some more though I guess at this point it's unlikely. Ayame needs some more rough lovin!
Keep writing.
person Mr.Postman
schedule January 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I have to say...chapter 3 was pretty damn stupid. There was absolutely NO reason to do that with Ayame, Sango and Inuyasha. Like seriously, aroused just at the sight of her and just want to fuck her? At first I thought, 'Hey, maybe she made Ayame put a spell on herself to attract Koga but apparently also made Inuyasha and Sango become attracted and their gonna ward it off by snapping out of it.' But all you did was just make them fuck each other because "I thought it would be hotter if there was threesome between my fav characters and they love/lust for one another in the process.". Makes no sense at all. Now that I have a fierce conversation with you, maybe you can get out of my office and escort yourself on outta here by Bob my pet rock.
person VFSNAKE
schedule January 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
NICE! Very good. Shame you never finished it. You still could. Like have the next chapter where the others find out, Inuyasha lets out his demon side in the process, and Kagome tries to sit him, but the necklace breaks thanks to the bond between the 3 lovers. Also, Kouga finds out, becomes upset, and tries to interfere at the same time, and get's stomped on by said 3 lovers. Please finish this since I like stories like this one.
person Nemean
schedule October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey Atropa,

Great story, but I'm running out of fingernails to bite waiting for chapter 6. Please, please, pretty plleeeaaaassssseeeeee with a cherry on top, update soon.

Twitchy with anticipation,
Legair
person BastardOmega
schedule May 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
am mute now tyvm. wide eyed, hard and anything in between. i have a thing for threesomes but that one really took the cake. lovely fic and perverted if i may add, but that is the fuking point.

PS: i have a challange 4 u: try make a inu/san/ayu/kag. pull that one of and your the best! that is of course if u want to make it. (:P)

Peace & Love BastardOmega
person Lord D
schedule November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please tell about them informing the group i think that would be interesting
person Spike
schedule September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
do another like that.
person whocares666
schedule August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
cmon update this story, finish it before you totally stop writing inu/san fics.
person Duran the Warrior
schedule February 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whew..... that's rather spicy yet interesting!
person AnimeMaster
schedule December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DAMN!!!!. Man was that a good lemon stoyry or what. My god, how on earth could you have come up with something so, so, .... DAMN!!!! I agree with your last comment. Time for a cold shower. I swear if you are ever going to write something like that again. Please e-mail me. I wouldn't miss it for the world. God that was a good fic.

Peace. EZ.