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for Unexpected Lullabies

by Sesshysfavhuman

person Priest Sanzo
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah happy stuff great chapter update soon please
person Anon
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy and glad that Kouga and Inu are making progress, but the question remains. Will Inu become intimate with Kouga and will Kouga let him? Hurry with the next chapter!!!
person nea
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the fact that you worte a fic about kouga being pregnant. Even though I love a good Inuyasha MPreg fic, this is a nice change of pace. I like that they have to learn to get along together for the sake of the pups. This should lead them to develop true natural feelings toward each other, that will hopefully lead to more. I love a good Inu/kouga fic, and am glad that Kouga is on the receiving end of everything. Inuyasha is usually the receiver of pain and humiliation. I truly enjoyed reading this fic and anticipate reading more soon. Just keep doin' what cha doin'!
person Dragon
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey! I really like this story and can't wait for the next chapter. There are so few stories out there were kouga is the sub and its nice to find one that is well written.
person Atropa
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I say go with the story. You and a few others have gotten me all hooked up on the mpreg-thing... I check out the yaoi-box everyday to see if any of you have updated.
I love the story.. you have such way of blend emotions that it got me all teared up... in a good way...
A big cheers for this wonderful chapter... and I hope to see more from you again.
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think that this is a wonderful story. It is about time that Koga carries the pups and is the sub. I like the way you've handled Koga's feelings about being raped, not wanting to talk about it, feeling ashamed and weak. You've kept everyone in character. That, in and of itself, is very difficult given the plotline. You're doing that. I'm thoroughly enjoying this fic and I know others are as well. Don't worry so much about how many reviews you get. People tend to get lazy after a while and review every couple of chapters. You're doing a wonderful job. You should be very, very proud of yourself. ^_^ Now that I've blown some sunshine up your butt and will I say, *can't waite for the next chapter, especially the lemon* ^_^
person IYYashi
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! The whole ritual thing is weird. I mean I know a sub is like submissive but being tied to an altar and letting someone mate with you in front of everyone is weird and wrong. I hope Kouga never has to go through that. C ya for your next update.
person Zombie_Hamster
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it! I've been hoping for a decent, semi-realistic, uke Kouga fic. Sure, it took a minute to digest Kouga being pregnet. (After all, how many times do I see my favorite ookami knocked up?) But once you get past that, it's all yummy wonderfullness. I hope you get a lemon in soon!--ZH
person Rawben
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol! i know! kouga's voice is ... hot! but yeah, very deep... but no worries, i think you're doing a very good job w/ this fic! AND I'M SO EXCITED THAT INU HAS TO TOUCH HIM NOW! HA!! ...man, you know that has to be akward...
a concern: i dont want inu to pretend he's skrewin kags when he actually does sex up kouga... and i'm worried that w/ him still smellin kags in kouga that he will...
other than that... frekkin great ff!!
person Dante
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story, it's the first one I've seen that has Kouga getting pregnant. The whole story flows well; not a fast paced or slow paced tale that is finished in a few chapters. I hope you keep updating until the end, some of your cliffhangers drive me up the wall.