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for Perfection Broken

by taiyoukai99

person Anon
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cant wait to see what happens next
person Piper
schedule April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't get it? What is he going to do, rape her and then throw her away, or keep her? And why is he doing this?
person bettychan
schedule April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn. This is so good. I hope you let Inuyasha keep Kagome and throw Kikyo away. I presume the pairing S/S is Sess and Sango. At least I hope so. I love Sess and Sango stories.
Oh well, any way you write it, I will read it. Please update as soon as you can.
person RainStorm
schedule April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe that's how ur going to end chapter 8. I'm exactly a fan of rape, but i was kind of rooting for Sessh there. I was also wishing i was Kagome too ( giggle). But anyway, i was just taking out the time to say that i am really enjoying the story so far. I like your writting style and cannot wait to find out the twist and turns you have instore for my favorite couple. I am glad that my girl has backbone and isn't just going to give to Sessh on a silver platter. But i also ask that Sessh remains the "MAN" throughout it all. Please DO NOT punk Sessh. I BEG OF U Well that's all I have to say for right now. Please notify me of future updates , i would truely appreciate it. PEACE!!!
person Majia
schedule April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Men are such bastards sometimes...whenever they can get something they take it and when the loose their fucking annoying...damnit sess go marry rin or something don't rape kags...jezz asswipe...ahem..your story is really good i'm hoping you'll update soon so i can review syaonara for now.
person fallenangel7583
schedule April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very intresting story. not liking that inu had to drop poor kaggs off to his brothers bed. make him fetch his own dinner. LOL. bad yasha. yes, very intresting story. something new. hmm. anywhos, keep it up!!!
person Megan Consoer
schedule April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters? Can the pairing be Sess and Kagome please.
person Bookreader9999
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great start, building the anticipation. We Want More!!!!
person Cassie
schedule March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWWW!!!!!!!!!!!! How could u? How could u stop right there...please another chapter!!! Must continue with story.


person swissnights
schedule March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
we need more stories of Sesshomaru and Sango love stories