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March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was very nice but there really short can you please make them longer
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schedule
March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
your storie is good but why are they so short?
schedule
March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
come on! where is the sex? we need some hot nasty sex in your stories if you're gonna post them on the internet. that will definitely catch the readers attention. and please use words that we can all understand. although i gotta hand it to you, some of you stories rock!
schedule
March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
come on! where is the sex? we need some hot nasty sex in your stories if you're gonna post them on the internet. that will definitely catch the readers attention. and please use words that we can all understand. although i gotta hand it to you, some of you stories rock!
schedule
March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heres some small advice. Elaborate, greatly. Describe what they're seeing in detail, what they're feeling, otherwise..the story is crapy. Sorry for being a bit harsh.