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August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like this story. hope you ceep going , it's good ^^
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August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wat is the fucken deal. all the stories cut off at a good place stop cutting them off.
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August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
now this looks like a good start to a story but.... ITS TO SHORT!!!! it shows little plot per chapter.
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August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think this is a very lovely fic and I am glad that you keep updating it. I am sad that the chapters arent longer, but anyway Update soon!
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August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please update sooner i really like this story
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August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Altari no likey. There's no explanation for the character development, which makes it seem like complete OOCness...
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August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Keep going hurry up school is coming soon HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUURRRRRRRRRRRRRRRYYYYYYYYYYY UUUUUUUUUUUUUPPPPPPPPPPPP don't make such short chapters **SHEESH**
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August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hurry up on the chapters. Scccccccccccchhhhhooolll is startinggggggg Hurry up **GOSH**
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July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
your story is really great....but I strongly suggest you make your chapters longer and try your best to keep your characters in character sesshoumaru is a character known to keep his cool he's usually calm and collected he dosent smile and if he did he would not do it in front of a servent well any way you'll get the hang of it at some point...great story and i look forward to reading more in the near future. :}
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July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DAMN YOU #1make these damn chp. so short#2leave us on this damn cliffy-_-' Update update update update update UPDATE