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May 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey you soo gotta keep this going it's great!! Please email me at alleycat6189@yahoo.com to tell me. PWEASE
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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's okay, but it's moving along a bit too quickly. Could you please slow it down and make the chapters a bit longer? If the story moves too fast, some readers may lose interest because they might think that the charactor's attributes are too different from the manga/anime charactor attributes.
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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you are right about the cliff hanger cause i'm hanging by two fingers i love you story it's really good
so i strongly encourage you to write more i'd love to see how this turns out.
so i strongly encourage you to write more i'd love to see how this turns out.
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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay I love your story PLEZE UP DATE REAL SOON.
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December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, interesting. Of course, I mean this in the best possible way. But, why did you suddenly stop? It was good! Can you update soon? I would love to see more of your work.
xxxx-Kinnara
xxxx-Kinnara
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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story please update soon
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December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
12-9-05
Can you come up with a new one today I want to know what happens. Pleas heary!!!!!!.......
Can you come up with a new one today I want to know what happens. Pleas heary!!!!!!.......
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November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
KEEP WRITING, KEEP WRITING,KEEP WRITING!
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October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i loveit u gotta update it's suck a good story plz
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October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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