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hey :) awsome story and lemon why was it so hard to right the lemon? anyway i love this chapter!!! ^_^ man i can see it now. Shit's gonna hit the fan once Ma finds out that his mark on her is gone. poor Kagome. she's never gonna find an end to her torment is she? *sighs* well as they say what doesn't kill you makes you stronger and if she makes it thoguth all this bullshit and still manages to smile then she's the female fuckin herculese(SP?) lol well anyway while i look forward to your other story updates i really enjoy this one so update when you can:)

ja ne!! ^_^

I think you did great on this chapter! I was readin at a friends and when I finished I didn't have time to review, but as soon as I got the chance I did! It's really good how you did the Lemon! Keep up the great writin! Can't wait for you'r next update!

UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU CAN! THAT LEMON WAS DIFFUCULT FOR ME TO READ...THIS STORY IS STILL GOING GREAT. THE QUESTION IS WHEN THEY WILL ESCAPE!!

Well done, Ryo.... !

Great work! To write a lemon under these circumstances must be really difficult. Too bad that they couldn´t enjoy it. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Whoohoo, Lemon!!!!! (chants) Lemon, lemon, Hiei and Kagome lemon.

Kami sama...Ryu chan...that was...utterly...AMAZING!! You did such an excellent job with the lemon. Slow and easy sets the pace. Especially after what they BOTH have been through. Kagome is such a sweetheart, and I'm really glad you didn't leave us hanging and that they'll be able to repair the tension that has come up. I don't want to think of their relationship in terms of broken, because I don't think it is. It's just a little strained, and for good reason. Hiei didn't want to force himself upon Kagome, and she didn't want to feel like she was useless to help him out.

But it comes down to the fact that they both love each other so much that neither one is willing to hurt the other, emotionally or physically.

It was another excellent chapter. I can't wait to read what happens next. Update when you can. :: huggles ::

Love ya!
Sayuri-chan~

OMFG!!!! Great new chap! I have been wating for this forever!!!! you are the best author ever!!! that mustve been tough to write.....i feel for you.....yah...

I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?

that was great the best i have ever read please keep updating.