rate_review Reviews

Given the situation they are in what IS ooc? In real life stress make people do very strange and uncharacteristic things. Hostages even bond with their captors. Flip the way your looking at it. How could they NOT gravitate towards one another as the only two not evil beings there? Kagome will always reach out, both for herself and to help others. Heie well, I'm sure he would do anything for his revenge, and if allieing with Kagome helps, its a far easier step then having to side with a captor. He just won't trust her completely right away. Remember too, that no matter how cold and distant any character that is "good" may appear, most have some aspect that shows they don't always want to be that way, not to everyone.
Now as for Masakazu's demise, call me sentimental but I prefer the punishment fitting the crime ending. Bring the hell of his own creation home to him, up close and personal so to speak. Something like every soul he has killed visiting vengeance on him while he is dragged to hell(I know, stolen plot line from Inuyasha but it works)kicking and screaming. Well screaming anyway as he should be helpless as it happens.
Now that I've bored you into a coma, I'm looking forward on how you will write the next few chapters. Hey if nothing else my ideas were bad enough to scare/shock your muse into action!

Wow. So, now, I am curious as to why Kags is in the Makai (besides the whole
prophecy ordeal) ? Can't wait till you update again... a good story just isn't a
good story without angst somewhere thrown in there.


-Jazz-

I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?

i like. you write really well and set up the story astoundingly. i wish that last chapter could have been a bit longer but oh well. question: when did he take the whip out of her, or is it still in?

intense. I really want this villain to die a slow prolonged painful death. Where Hiei is concerned payback is so going to be a vicious bitch after all that suffering he went through.

i dont usually review here , but i had to
its a well writen story so far
with a very creative plot
but all i ask is that you dont get graphic with the rape and stuff like that
thought its a wonderful story so far
i beg you to not go into detail later
thanks and keep up the good work

You warned us. I trust your judgement on how graphic or violent a passage need be to convey the feeling you want, you have not been off yet. This isn't normally my taste, but I will stick with it because it promises to evolve into yet another good read.

I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?

BURN,BURN,BURRRRRRNNNN

Ouch. My stomach's churning.

I'm glad that you've been fairly tasteful as you possibly can given the
kind of violence that has ensued, so far... and I hope, with as much
of an angst lover as I am, that you give breaks to us... well, me, anyway.
It doesnt have to be right away, since it is your story, and since I'll read
no matter what you write. (Because I really love your work). Anyhoo,
that's my two cents.

I think I'm going to go take time to smell this bouquet of roses I received,
now.... a short stop from the intensity, that it is~~

-Jazz-