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for On The Night Of A Blood Red Moon

by ryukotsusei

person Jasmine Fields
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very --- eugh... I'm speechless, really. Very sad; I think I'm going to cry.

person Sayuri-chan
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...*crawls into a ball weeping* Kagome...chan...I wish for her to find her inner peace. I really do. So much has happened to her, and losing Kouga was the final straw for our little sister. I hope Hiei can save her spirit...so much do I wish he can...but I still wonder...what happens? How do they get seperated? How does he get away and what happens to her? Ah, you have to write more soon. I love this story so much.
Sayuri-chan
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay. I think I've cooled down enough to review. I was in total shock that MY Koga got snuffed. But ya know, I had a feeling it was coming. How stupid is Koga for going their alone. He always thinks he's tougher than he really is. But I'm hoping that Sessy will bring him back. That is if you don't pitch his head in the garbage somewhere away from his body, lol. Or maybe Koenma will bring him back. I'm grasping at straws here, lol. Wow! Did Kag take a beating or what. How do you come up with some of this stuff. I'm very, very scarwed of you now. (just kidding) I have to say that as dark and gruesome as this last chapter was, you wrote it brilliantly. Your creativity never ceases to astound me. No matter which story of yours I'm reading, I find myself glued to my seat and my eyes locked on the text in spellbinding rapture. You truly are one of my most favorite writers, and I'm including published authors from my list. I can't wait to see what happens next. I do hope though that I can see MY Koga again in some fashion. I'd even take him as an angel up in spirit world. Okay, I better stop now because I'm starting to sound ridiculous. CYA next chappie.
person sendosha
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woah, I wish Kagome had somehow slashed out at Midoriko. Gods, poor Koga. he really didn´t deserve such an end. Again, great work, looking forward to the next chapter
person Megan Consoer
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, I can't seem to remember if I have reviewed this as of late, so I will do so now.

First off, I can't believe that Kouga was actually dumb enough to try and rescue Kagome on his own. He should have known that it could only end badly. I love Kouga and hated to see him die at all...let alone in such a gruesome fashion. I think he's sweet even if a little dense.

And poor Kagome. Gods, to have to suffer through all that and not even be able to succumb to unconciousness. And then, to have to choose one of two people she cared for to die. I don't envy her position at all. I can understand why she made the choice she did, seeing as how Hiei had put himself up for torture to spare her already. Besides that, Masakazu most likely would have killed Kouga anyway and had Kagome chosen Hiei, she would have been left completely alone.

Another excellent and stomach turning chapter. Sometimes, I almost feel sick reading them, but I can't help but continue. As always, I look forward to the next update.
person Animeholic
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update as soon as you can!! I can't believe Kouga died!! Will Sesshoumaru come for her and succeed?! Don't let anymore of the Canon charactors die!! (Weeps over Knoga's death)
person karlina
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i'm liking the story, this is a new one for me. i gasped on some of the more vicious aspects, but please do continue
person EnV
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg...that fucking perverted crow...i swear wen hiei and kagome kill him. they should borrow sesshoumaru's sword to bring him back, just to kill him again! lol..update soon! this is such an awesome story!
person Jinx
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooohh...I can't wait till Hiei finally gets his revenge! It will be sweet! Hope you update again soon! Keep up the wonderful writing!