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for On The Night Of A Blood Red Moon

by ryukotsusei

person vivian
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Gives you a big kiss and bows before her queen* Excellent! Loved it, definitely worth waiting for!
person Megan Consoer
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
person Megan Consoer
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
person Jasmine Fields
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter... you're magnificent!

Love,
Jazz
person Anon
schedule September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love this story its so dark full of anguish yet its one of the best xovers i have read i am so glad ur updating again please update soon^^ i'll be waiting
person Silver1
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry, but i don't think i can stand to read this anymore. It's not that I don't think that you are a good writer; I have read and enjoyed your other fics. They're great! Especially Circle of Souls -which is under revision - and Calling of blood - I think(apologies if i don't have the title right) - also under revision. I have enjoyed all of them. For me, personally, I think this is too dark. How much longer is this "rape and torture them in the most disgusting way" going to go on?? Yes, i know this is a dark fic. But making kags choose between Hiei and Kouga, and having Kouga killed?? Kudos for dramatic effect, but really! and being raped by a broken bottle? Since I am not the author, I can't tell if there is a purpose to all this; although it must be going somewhere. There isn't even an explaination yet as to why Midoriko allowed this to happen; it sems to be a bit OOC for her. Frankly, I'd want her dead, even she wasn't already. I would normally hang in there to see what happened, but I get the feeling this kind of thing will be going on for a while and that Hiei and Kags won't be getting out of there anytime soon. If I had a hint when that would happen, I'd be tempted to jump in at that point. In the meantime, please keep up your good work with your other stories. I look forward to updates. BTW - any idea when the stories currently under revision will be updated? I really love Circle of Souls.
person Anon
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The reaction one would expect from Ayame. Update as soon as you can. I dont doubt that your sick mind will want Ayame dead too.
person Jinx
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It is so sad wut is happenin to Kagome, but I strongly believe that as long as Hiei is there he will be able to help her through all of it. Keep us the wonderful writing and please update again soon!
person Gem
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Been a wild ride so far. This is darker fare than I normally read, but the story is so good and it is well written I could not pass it by. Have to admit I glossed over where Kouga was killed, I do like his character, so I am glad to see your not done with him yet. Keep up the impressive work.
person Doodler5000
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I had this feeling you weren't through with Kouga yet. So Hiei gets to heal her soul while Kouga heals her body. This is a really good, intense fic, keeps me on the edge of my seat. I can't wait for them to get free and hopefully kick butt.