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for Cocktail Mix 26

by Atropa

schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cool!

I'm glad you liked my story idea.

I can just see Batou snorting "Poor uneducated bastards", then going home to feed his cloned dog.

Good work!

person Sentinel_of_Ganymede
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Good to see that you haven't completely disappeared! Please keep bringing us fantastic fics like this one!

person Broken Dreams
schedule March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey i love this cocktail mix almost as much as all the others...hehehehe! Well i think this story is great and so are all of ur other ones! I would gladly help u think of a name for ur story here but iam just as stumped as u r! Well anyways, i have a request that i am hoping u would be able to fill out for me! I actually think its a great idea but i am so caught up in my own work that i don't have enough time....well here it is:

Maybe u can make a one-shot or perhaps a huge story that has an Inutashio/Sango pairing! I can't exactly spell Inutashio but u know who that is rite (Inuyasha's and Sessh's dad)! Well anyways i think u should a pairing of the two, either in the waring states era or our time!

For the waring states era u should have: Sango is actually part of Midoriko's spirit in her body, adn she has lived for a long long time now and before Inutashio had died, he had loved sango and sango had loved him back but then he had to go to war and supposedly died (But Sango is not Inuyasha's and Sessh's mom, this is before he met Sessh's and Inu's moms) but anyways he went to war and never returned, so Sango thought that he had died so she moved on....but while Inutashio had gone to war....his servant or somethign like that didn't like the fact that Inutashio was with a human demon slayer so he told Inutashio that Sango had died and that he should move on, so he did and found someone else but he stilled loved Sango....and then u can put more in it if u want!

For the 'our time' one: Well u can have Sango be captured by some men and sent back to Inutashio for a piece offering from some lord that was planning on killing Inutashio and taking back Sango later on....but anyways Sango is sent to Inutashio and she is feirce and a wild female who won't become anyone's servant but then Inutashio (after a couple of days and alot of arguing) had tamed her and then they fall in love and have sex and then Naraku (the lord who sent the piece offering) comes to attack and get Sango, and the end up in an all out war and Inutashio and them win the war and they live happily every after!!!

how bout it? I think its great, well there just ideas for ya ok? Well anyways u can do one or both or none if u don't want to....but plz consider it and at least let me know u read this!

thanx

-Broken Dreams

p.s. This story really is great!
person adam
schedule March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i want to thank u for writeing this story i love your work and i hope u keep it up.
person Inu-Shinta
schedule March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please continue with the story. I consider Motoko Kusanagi to be one of my five most favorite female anime characters. Inuyasha is my most favorite male anime character so this pairing is twice as enjoyable for me.
person ducusdraconis
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so far so good, i find it really interesting that Kaede and can't wait to see if you portray her any differnetly. I also like the idea that Shippou is alot older than he appears. The only problem would be Motoko turning human since to me it seemed that the fact that she had an artifical body was a big part of the character.
person ducusdraconis
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
didn't finish my sentence about Kaede. oops. It was that i find the idea of her getting younger interesting.
person Sentinel_of_Ganymede
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey!!! Atropa-chan!!!!! I love this story so far! Hell, I love all of your fics! Please don't keep us waiting!