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June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this was so cute! I want more of sango and kouga please
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June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is great so far. It is going at a very nice pace to follow. As for a name for it.......the hanyou and the healing of the Shell.
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June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love your idea about Shippo. I’ve wondered about the age concept myself. Kudos for writing it down. ^_^
Motoko, acting girly. Huh. Kinda OC, but then it’s all in good fun. Would like to see a fight in which her acrobatics come into play. Perhaps finally acquiring some sort of weapon, too – with her strength imagine what she could wield!
Kinda funny that folks consider Batou a lord, but then his size and educated bearing would tend to indicate a privileged upbringing. Poor guy, tossed into a world not literal enough for his tastes…Hey! Wonder if he and Motoko can still communicate via their cybernetics? Could be a handy plot device if group needs to split to search/fight something, you know.
Another bunny…Batou likes Kaede. Kaede can see crystal shards somewhat and the big guy has enhanced vision. Maybe he can be the group’s new ‘seeker’? See shards, miasma, etc. That would throw him for another loop, 'seeing' magic with his technology. :P
Hope neither of the two ‘borgs gets damaged, however. Even if they start becoming more human, Motoko and Batou still have a mechanical component that needs repair not available in the past.
Anyways – as crazy and implausible and OC as this story is – I like it. Just goes to show that decent writing can make even an unlikely crossover work. Keep it up!
Motoko, acting girly. Huh. Kinda OC, but then it’s all in good fun. Would like to see a fight in which her acrobatics come into play. Perhaps finally acquiring some sort of weapon, too – with her strength imagine what she could wield!
Kinda funny that folks consider Batou a lord, but then his size and educated bearing would tend to indicate a privileged upbringing. Poor guy, tossed into a world not literal enough for his tastes…Hey! Wonder if he and Motoko can still communicate via their cybernetics? Could be a handy plot device if group needs to split to search/fight something, you know.
Another bunny…Batou likes Kaede. Kaede can see crystal shards somewhat and the big guy has enhanced vision. Maybe he can be the group’s new ‘seeker’? See shards, miasma, etc. That would throw him for another loop, 'seeing' magic with his technology. :P
Hope neither of the two ‘borgs gets damaged, however. Even if they start becoming more human, Motoko and Batou still have a mechanical component that needs repair not available in the past.
Anyways – as crazy and implausible and OC as this story is – I like it. Just goes to show that decent writing can make even an unlikely crossover work. Keep it up!
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May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good story. as for a title I think that
Inuyasha in the Shell, Lemon Complex
would be a good one.
Inuyasha in the Shell, Lemon Complex
would be a good one.
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May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story! keep writting!!
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April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Call it Inuyasha and the Beautiful cyborg! (meh its the best i could come up with)
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April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought the latest update is wonderfull,things are starting to get...well yea like you said in the A/N anyways it makes you wonder if sessho will get a mate...
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April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hope u update soon, this story is one of the best that i have read
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April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is gonna be updated soon, right? I love the pairings, as un-canon as they are. Update, pleeeeeeaaaase!
Lils
Lils
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April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was realy good, you're my favorite writer in the Inuyasha section... keep up the good work.