rate_review Reviews

I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?

Ok No offense, you have a lot of potetntial, but I just was feeling the Fic. this is just some contsructive criticizm...ok? You need to work on your grammer (sorry majored in English) and your spelling. The way you had Sesshomaru speaking was kinda out of character (but then again it is a fan fic, so you do what you want), although the plot was pretty good and I am a total Kikyo hater, so I liked how you potrayed her...I hope that I did not offend you, I just know if you keep writing, you'll improve alot. Good Luck on your future fan fics!