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May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
okay chap 1 was a little to mushy(for me) but well written, and I love how they came together and are not fussing and still acting like their not together. THANK YOU FOR THAT.
next I felt you rushed the mother and Inuyasha part but it was good, don't understand why everyone has them hide their mating from their friends once it's done so did not like that, and sango being a little upset was good to bring a little tension to the story.
again(like most authors) you ignore the S/M storyline but this is a good solid story so I let it go. LOL at her friends and their scents that was good and funny
also like how he has her power great! Now last chap with Sess...well wish he hadn't have done it because now Inuyasha will have to kill him and I was hoping since they worked together in the start they could have some kind of brotherly love but not a bad twist!
I enjoyed the mating rules not to soft but fitting for a demon(cause a demon he is!) Liked the Kouga scene. good story and good writing you have some very good points going on in this story, I will look for an update
next I felt you rushed the mother and Inuyasha part but it was good, don't understand why everyone has them hide their mating from their friends once it's done so did not like that, and sango being a little upset was good to bring a little tension to the story.
again(like most authors) you ignore the S/M storyline but this is a good solid story so I let it go. LOL at her friends and their scents that was good and funny
also like how he has her power great! Now last chap with Sess...well wish he hadn't have done it because now Inuyasha will have to kill him and I was hoping since they worked together in the start they could have some kind of brotherly love but not a bad twist!
I enjoyed the mating rules not to soft but fitting for a demon(cause a demon he is!) Liked the Kouga scene. good story and good writing you have some very good points going on in this story, I will look for an update
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April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that is awsome so far, i comend you please keep up the good work
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April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh this is great i like how you combined ther powers i can only hope that kakomay is gaing his strength and speed as well that would be great. You have a great story hear keep up the great work. Update agin soon.
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March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
For the love of God write more!!! Awesome fic!
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March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woo! please update!!! its really good!!
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March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Keep it comin'.
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March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great first chapter! Can't wait to read more! Update soon!
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March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww. This story is soo kawaii. PLZ update soon!