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April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Brings back memories of a staircase. The Hunter Hunts, but still doesn't know the prey.
Long and filled with... sex. A lot of stories on this site are filled with it. Give me some more plot, that is what I will rate you on. Up for it? (You're the random reviewed for the morning. Goodnight.)
Long and filled with... sex. A lot of stories on this site are filled with it. Give me some more plot, that is what I will rate you on. Up for it? (You're the random reviewed for the morning. Goodnight.)
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April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT!!! its really good Please make another chapter soooon!
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April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i apologize for the lack of reviews from me... i've been bad. My compy hasn't been the greatest of friends as of late *glares at computer*
Anyways... *waves her precious rainbow flag* excellent excellent story. My favorite on this site, i believe. It's so hard to find good yuri on this site. And when i find ones i'm interested in the author drops off the face of the earth. Anyways... i've been terrible, i know. So, since i can't remember if i reviewed for two and three (probably not) i shall review all three chapters (i know i did one, of course)
Two: Cliffhangers are stupid. XD Of course once i actually got around to reading it you were updated, so i guess it doesn't matter. I like how you provide conflict. Instead of making it just smutt you offer challenges and conflict, which is good. I love it. Though i wish Kagome were more coroporative! *shakes fist*
Three: Sexy, sexy, sexy smutt! I loved this chapter so, so much. It was sexy, it was excellent... crap, i can't think of any more adjectives to describe this chapter. The way you had Sango pleasure Kagome and vise versa was absolutely breathtaking. It left me breathless... among other things. Perhaps a suggestion i can offer you is maybe a little more detail? Not too much that it becomes nasty, but enough for us to *really* get the feel. I love your writing style, don't get me wrong. I adore this story.
Four: Smutty goodness, though tamer than the last few chapters. I'll assume you're leading up to bigger and better things, huh? XD Lol. Anyways, i liked it how you teased us and then pulled us away from Ayame. Too bad, Sango and Ayame is an interesting couple. And Kagura turned Naraku? Awesome. Though now it seems that Sango's in for more conflict with Miroku (and Kohaku if the poor boy's ever finds the courage to face her)
Good chapters, update soon.
Anyways... *waves her precious rainbow flag* excellent excellent story. My favorite on this site, i believe. It's so hard to find good yuri on this site. And when i find ones i'm interested in the author drops off the face of the earth. Anyways... i've been terrible, i know. So, since i can't remember if i reviewed for two and three (probably not) i shall review all three chapters (i know i did one, of course)
Two: Cliffhangers are stupid. XD Of course once i actually got around to reading it you were updated, so i guess it doesn't matter. I like how you provide conflict. Instead of making it just smutt you offer challenges and conflict, which is good. I love it. Though i wish Kagome were more coroporative! *shakes fist*
Three: Sexy, sexy, sexy smutt! I loved this chapter so, so much. It was sexy, it was excellent... crap, i can't think of any more adjectives to describe this chapter. The way you had Sango pleasure Kagome and vise versa was absolutely breathtaking. It left me breathless... among other things. Perhaps a suggestion i can offer you is maybe a little more detail? Not too much that it becomes nasty, but enough for us to *really* get the feel. I love your writing style, don't get me wrong. I adore this story.
Four: Smutty goodness, though tamer than the last few chapters. I'll assume you're leading up to bigger and better things, huh? XD Lol. Anyways, i liked it how you teased us and then pulled us away from Ayame. Too bad, Sango and Ayame is an interesting couple. And Kagura turned Naraku? Awesome. Though now it seems that Sango's in for more conflict with Miroku (and Kohaku if the poor boy's ever finds the courage to face her)
Good chapters, update soon.
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April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Would also like to add:
Congrats on the fourth chapter! You deserve so many more reviews than you're getting. You're truly an amazing writer!
Congrats on the fourth chapter! You deserve so many more reviews than you're getting. You're truly an amazing writer!
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April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow.
That was a twister!
Your're good!
5 out of 5!
That was a twister!
Your're good!
5 out of 5!
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April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey you:)
Thankx again for your reviews....you know what, I might need a proofreader. Just email me, let me know what to do ok? Thankx
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April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww!
Poor Sango.
It was still good though.
5 out of 5!
Do you need a proofreader?
And what about Kagura?
Poor Sango.
It was still good though.
5 out of 5!
Do you need a proofreader?
And what about Kagura?
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April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good!
Maybe they should have a threesome.
5 out of 5!
PS-I have something for you.E-mail me.
Maybe they should have a threesome.
5 out of 5!
PS-I have something for you.E-mail me.
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April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww-pouts- i'll wait...
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April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW....Okay this is cool. More people are diggin' it....Oi, thankx?
Hmmm...Sango and Kagura....I'l have to think about that one;). Well, my next chappie is coming up soon!