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by ChocolateHentai

person sirhcnotlih
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey CH!

I loved this chappie!

Keep it up!

5 out of 5!

Oh, Do you still need proofreading?
person CommanderX1125
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very well written in the last chapter, I have to say that. I was on the edge of my seat waiting to see how it turned out. Please continue this story I can't bear the wait! I was most impressed when you had the monk become aware of the incident as well, I have to know how it ends!
person Anon
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey.....that wasn'tr very nice.... lol. dont ruin kagome and inuyasha's relationship :(
person HAP
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay, you updated, i'm so happy *waves rainbow flag happily* And i knew this confrontion would have to happen sooner or later. It's a shame it's happened this way... and even though i understand Miroku's betrayal and anger, it's a shame that he had to explode on Sango like that. Truly a shame, because, even though i adore yuri to oblivion, SanMiro and Inukag are just so cute together.

But, aside from that, i have to say that this was a great chapter. Very emotional and poor, poor Sango. And poor Kagome... wouldn't want to be on the other end of Inu's glare ^^;
person I\'mLuvinit
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OmG! Update soon I wanna know whats gonna happen next. How is this going to end? Is Sango gonna end up with anyone or is she gonna be alone? Please let her end up with soome one... preferably a girl! Anywyas! UPDATE SOON!
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww...thanks guys. I was sort of nervous about this one because Miroku was soooo out of character but hell, he was pissed. Thanks again, but worry, I'll try to have an update soon,
person KagsKitty
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!! I hope sango ends up with kagome, Please update soon~~
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM


Aww...thank you all who have been supportive and opend minded about my story:0)

YEAH.....You guys liked the Kagura/Naraku twist...I was a little worried about that one.

HAP......THANKX for the love, mean alot from a fellow child of the rainbow:)...lol

Don't worry, I'm working on the next chappie....my schedules going to be hectic....last few weeks of the semester: y'all know how it is:)
person Interested
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow... Another cliffy. I hate it and love it at teh same time. I wonder who Sango is going to end up with in the end. Is Miroku gonna end up finding about Sango's deeds? How is Miroku going to react to everything? Please update soon!!! I'm dying to find out what'll happen next.
person sirhcnotlih
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Can I proofread the next chappie?