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please i Have been wait a really long time for a new chapter
please write on i want to know what sango going to say to kagome
and what kagome's mom going to say about what kagome had did please your number one fan 8)

Kick ass story dude! can't wait to see the next chapter!

Wow... that's some serious shit. Very well written though. I certainly did not expect this to happen at all... I definitely didn't expect Miroku to get so pissed like that! You'd think that he liked lesbians...

WOW I just..... wow i don't know what to say except for you to keep on writing and updating.

THAT was soooo freaking good!

Very good, a few letters here or there were missed, but I can't blame you. The screen you use to type directly is a bit small, and mistakes come easy. Besides all of that, it was great, although a bit more of Miroku and his thoughts would of been nice.

Must.............read................more................

huray, i'm so glad you updated! ^_^ I've been waiting eagerly for Inuyasha's reaction. And i must say that i'm very happy with the way he handled it. I'm glad that he doesn't hate Kagome, becuase even though i'm a Kag/San fan one hundred and ten percent, Inu and Kag are just so adorable together. ^-^

Excellent update. But still, poor Miroku and Sango. The angst is so... angsty. ^0^ update soon!

May I suggest the next chapter should be a song fic?

I have 2 perfect songs for by the band Crossfade.

So far away

I've been changing but you'll never see me now
I've been changing but you'll never see me now
Now I'm blaming you for everything

No more holding it in
How many years can I pretend
That nothing ever goes the way it should
No more sitting in this place
Hoping you might see it my way
'Cause I don't think you ever understood
That what I'm looking for are the answers
To why these questions never go away

I'm so far away
I've been changing but you'll never see me now
I'm so far away
Now I'm blaming you for everything

No more waiting for the end
Of every day that I will spend
Wishing that I only had a choice
No more pushing you away
'Cause I'll be busy watching things go my way
Never looking back on this anymore
'Cause what I'm looking for are the answers
To why these questions never go away

I'm so far away
I've been changing but you'll never see me now
I'm so far away
Now I'm blaming you for everything

I've been changing but you'll never see me now
Now I'm blaming you for
Everything

I'm so far away

Hey, hey watch me wave
Goodbye to yesterday
Nothing left in my way
Hey, hey I've been saved
With sun shining on my face
Getting me through this day
Hey, hey watch me wave
Goodbye to yesterday
Nothing left in my way
It feels so good to say

I'm so far away
I've been changing but you'll never see me now
I'm so far away
Now I'm blaming you
I'm so far away

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Starless

If only you could watch me fall
I cannot feel it anymore
The soul you cut, The soul you adore,
Cannot feel you anymore
'Cause you've run through me with destructive force
I think somehow I gotta get it straight
I gotta get you out of me
But I cannot get through to you

See me I'm down and I get deeper with every breath
See me I'm over the edge farther with every step
See me I'm down and I get deeper with every breath
Standing over the edge I'm taking my last breath

How I feel like I'm starless
I'm ready to fade now
And how I feel like I'm starless
I'm hopeless and greyed out
Somehow I feel like I'm starless
I'm ready to fade now
And now I feel like I'm starless
I'm ready to burn out

I can transcend you and mentally bend you,
But I cant handle the shit that I'm into
I have been blinded and always reminded,
Of the things I've wanted but I never could find
I am part of a world that I hate,
I wish the end would come faster
My world's a disaster,
Cant you see that I'm down and I'm drowning
And I cant keep my head above my wake

See me I'm down and I get deeper with every breath
See me I'm over the edge farther with every step
See me I'm down and I get deeper with every breath
Standing over the edge I'm taking my last breath

How I feel like I'm starless
I'm ready to fade now
And how I feel like I'm starless
I'm hopeless and greyed out
Somehow I feel like I'm starless
I'm ready to fade now
And now I feel like I'm starless
I'm ready to burn out

I gotta get you out of my veins
I gotta get you out of my blood
I gotta get you out of my scene
I gotta get you out of me

What I'm really trying hard to get down to words,
Is the way I fit into this world
Things I survived pushed me to the darker side
Because of the life as it was,
The life that was your's,
Should've been mine
But I never could take anymore of this
'Cause I'm always gonna get down to the floor
It's a cold gun that I kiss
'Cause I cannot break anymore

Somehow I feel like I'm starless
I'm ready to fade now
Thats how I feel when I'm starless
I'm hopeless and greyed out
Somehow I feel like I'm starless
I'm ready to burn out
Oh, now I'm starless



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Those are the 2 songs that would work for the next chapter.

5 out of 5!

I miss ya. When I get my new E-mail up, I'll tell ya.

An update finally!!! Update soon please. So does this mean Sango is going to end up with Kagome? Because it seems so sudden... first Sango's screwing around with Kikyo and all those other girls, now she's a one woman woman? You should like get deeper in the relationship or something. Otherwise, it's a good story. Update soon please!

This Fic is awsome. I can't wait for the rest!