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June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Its good, but it need longer chapters and more to describe! Please review soon! I will look! :)
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May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The chapters just keep on getting better and better! Please update soon and keep up the good work^__^!!!
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May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not sure what you're doing with Naraku, but I guess I'll have to wait and see what is up your sleeve. Good Job.
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May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I started trying to read this story but the first two chapters really put me off. The constant change of Point-of-View is irritating and makes the flow really jerky and disruptive. 'Sorry, that's just my opinion but I'm sure others found the format hard to take too, otherwise you'd have more reviews for a story with that many chapters.
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May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't find it confusing. Maybe from some people the fact that you jump from both Kagome and Inuyasha's take on what happen maybe, but you always let us know that you which character you're talking about. Keep it up I'm looking foward to seeing your next chapter.
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May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've never reviewed any of the fanfictions so this is a first. I really liked this one. It doesn't follow the Inuyasha storyline but it has captivated me. It's one of those stories that you want to know whats going to happen next. I look foward to seeing you update this when you have a chance. They are too many to read but I will be sure to check up on you again.
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May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yea, I never really liked Kikyo either. O.O Yay, Naraku... and so the plot thickens.. dun dun dun^^ Please update soon and keep up the good work^__^!!!
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May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gawd Awful. Inuyasha cheating on Kagome. Do you know these characters?
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May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay, the chapter was longer. That was very well written, and I'm happy that you are continuing this fic. Hope to read some more soon, keep up the good work^__^!!!
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May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay you updated. Well, at least you've planted the seeds for the next part of your plot. I have never beev a Beta before, so I'd be afraid that I would screw it up, anyway great chapter, would like it to be a wee little longer, and I hope to read the next chapter soon, keep up the good work^__^!!!