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this is the BEST story i've ever read...love the way your first chapter came up nice and long...the ending was good too! xD update onegai shimasu

Hey this is a very good beginning to the story. I can't wait to see how Inuyasha's going to keep his professional attitude now that he had slept with a cheater. Will he let her get away with it? Will he keep her around since she's his now? Please write more soon!
I'm surprised that you described Kagome as "slutty" in your author's note while she was described as "innocent" through the chapter. I can't wait for the background information next chapter :)

such passion & descriptions leaving me in inuyasha's state lolz jk
honestly, (probably cz im a mix of traditional/wild) that...
they moved a little too fast ...inuyasha's character as a demon SHOULD make
him suspicious of women EVEN though she offers him such comfort (emotionally).
my wild/kinky side tells me that shouldn't they just get over the attraction & conquering state & move on??
sorry, my mind runs away with me but ur story is a really REALLY hotttt
i don't bother writing to much authors BUT since ur so exceptional i decided to let u hear me "voice."
in conclusion...plz UPDATE SOON ASAP ;P

I liked it. The story is very interesting and I can't wait to read more. It was a little odd that Kagome would just fall into Inuyasha's arms like she did. I kept thinking she would do somthing to distract him so she could leave. I am hoping that her behavior will be explained more later. Great job!

okay, well...review, ey? here we go. GREAT story. i love the abundant amount of description and dialogue contained. you have such a great frame set up for your characters that it is amazing, there should be no reaason in the world as to why you would not continue this story. you really worked your characters well in this! i love how you have InuYasha as the 'good' son, which is a fresh idea that i have NEVER seen done. i love your Kagome, she's also a fresh character, away from the facade of 'pity me, i'm innocnet'. i love how you have her play the role of it but then wham, she isn't. that's GREAT!!! also your dialogue with Miroku and yash at the bar, excellently done!! i was laughing histerically. you really really have a great peice of writing here and i really hope you chose to continue with it.

if you want some constructive critisicm, my only words to instill would be towards the end. i was reading and reading, thinking to myself, holy shit, she's really up shit's creek, and nearly died when he said she cut her cousins ears off. that was AMAZING, but then i felt the last few paragraphs, where the climax of the story (for kag and inu lovers) led to was suddenly...cut short maybe? i was really confused as to what EXACTLY happened between them. maybe its the hentai in me, or the website and teh expectations, but i was really thrown there. the way i read it written in context was that they simply made out but the 'afterglow' was that of a sexual relationship, teh way she suddenly found herself on his level and able to talk to such a man as he. if they did or dind't have sex is basically where you lost me. you might want to consider either revising that or maybe going into a slight definition at the start of the next chapter as to what exactly happened.

anyways, as i said before, great story!!!! i love it!!! keep it up!!!!