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person sexykagome03
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I bet it was Naraku! o__o

Ha ha. GREAT STORY! PLZ continue!!

~sexykagome03
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
o_O. i honestly don't know what this story has done for me but somewhere around 2pm i realized that i forgot to include in my review yesterady how absolutely much i LOVE your inuyasha. now, i love all of the bad boy highschool yash stories (hell, i wrote one) but this blows EVERYTHING out of the freaking water!!! i mean, absoulty freaking across the world goodbye out of the water!!! but your yash is to die for...i'm serious. to-freakin-die for. ::giant sigh:: damn kagome. ANYWAY....great addition to the story, i'm sooo happy that you're continuing it. i was escastic when i saw that you updated. woot!! hmm....virtual pokey. (pokey is really the best thing on this planet). let me think...i don't think that Kagome is really using Yash against Miroku (she doesnt' know of his issues with Yash yet) but i'm willing to bet that either 1) miroku has chased off past boyfreinds on Kagome or 2) he is overbearing becasue of a prior circumstance that he prevented from happening, posibly? hmm....

anyway, yes, i am no longer confused by the first chapter and was glad to see they didnt' get down and nasty cause that makes this nice and sweet to watch unfold. i love it,i love it, i need more of it!!! keep it going, this fic is perfect!!!!
person trina
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love it. there is no other way to put it. i love it. i love it. chapter 3 was so good . but i still have no clue really on what happen in their past. cant wait for your next chapter. did i tell you how much i love the fact that you update often.bye bye. love the story.
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOOT for pocky!! and yay for another great chapter. excellent character digressions. i love how protective miroku is, no matter how annoying it may be. just grabbing her out of the cafe was ballsy and earned him so giant 'you go boy' points. yay!!! hmm...so, still dishing out the pocky, huh? i stick by my guess that some asshole tried to force himself on her and was probably stopped to close to acheiving his goal (since she is still a virgin). but i'll throw in the clause that maybe it was one of Miroku's friends? hmm...anyway, i'm hooked and really really realllllllly loving the story and inuyasha. (i have a forboding feeling that Miroku needs to stop worrying about inuyasha and START worrying about kouga). so...here's my next question. where is this hotle and how far is it from where they live? and what is poor Kagome goign to do when the week is over? (become a card dealer, thats what, LOL). GREAT story!!!!
person keke
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DAMNIT!!!! write the next chapter PLEASE??? I cant wait any longer...
person Thebigguy69
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I KNOW! I KNOW! NARAKU!!!! That sumbitch is the one who hurt her in some way. not rape, shes still a virgin oooohh mabye kikyo, nope she uses that as a fake name. Did he cheat on her or beat her up? Yea naraku is the type of coward that would hit a girl. Bastard.
Pocky please.. uhn no POCKY NOW!!! Ahh thank you.
person ME...
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far! Keep up the good work!
person scerpixy5
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. I have not read one with this type of story line before. I like the fact that it was a long chapter and it contained detail. Please uodate this story I really enjoyed reading it.
person Keik0
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was so hot smut
person Mija
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey I like it...lol..its something new and diffrent and I cant wait to see where this goes, if Kagome is true to her nature thus far, she wont stop cheating and Inu will have to do something wont he??/ hehe cant wait to find out, hope to read more till then be well safe and happy, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)