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person keke
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
thanks... um... ok Damn it I cant think of anything to say!!! well thanks again
person Drew
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Well, I decided to review because your story is SO FANTASTICALLY AWESOME. And I only review my favorite stories so there. That can tell you something about yours. That I think its awesome. And its one of my favorites. Yes. And I actually really liked the way you used Sango as some comic relief for this chapter. It was nice, to not have all angst. I like angst of course, but only in small does. Or when Im sure the end result will turn out... well, citrusy.

"One track mind, I swear"

Hah. Im glad you have a one track mind. That makes the both of us, although the parts of the story that arent focusing on citrus are also very interesting.

-Drew
person Chokoreto
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow...hahas im actually blown away by this chapter..once again its was nice and smooth =D hahahas love the conflict between inuyasha and miroku...though sango needs to get more into action...hahas yeahh thats just my advice..please update!
person GreenRider
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Something anout Hojo? I LOVE your story it's one of my very favorites!!*~ ^_^
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
haha...Sango was afraid of a metal-bat swinging, sixteen-year-old Koharu...but then again I'd be freaked out too. I've said this once, I'll say it again: I absolutely LOVE this fic (and I'll keep saying it too! ^_^)Sooooo...what did Kagome see to make her gasp like that? Well...I suppose I'll find out next chapter, no? Until then: keep up the amazing work!!!!
Claire (^-^)
person Bunnie
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think that Kagome was betrayed by an old boyfriend...maybe hojo? I don't know. Well I really like this story and I think that Inuyasha is really HOT in this one. Being the owner of a casino and all mob like...kind of......keep up the good work!
person Hillary ( Biganimefan1)
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think that kag may have been almost raped or killed by someone she dated/trusted. But Miro is soooooooooooo overprotective!!!!! And I think you are doing such a great job with this fic and wanted to know if you can make this a threesome with kag/inu/-koga-sessy-or with another anime characterlike yoko- and/or kurama!!!!
person andross
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ill guess!! virtual pocky is tasty. ok i think kagome was NOT raped because inuyasha could tell if she was still a virgin, so i think that she had a boyfriend that cheated on her and left her for this woman. most likely hojou? or maybe naraku?
person RAchel77
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story, keep the reviews comin', and i'm guessing that kagome was involved with another character either an OC or possibly Naraku i'm thinking and miroku tried to warn her and keep her away from him but she didn't listen and something really bad happened that my brain has yet to decide on. But anywho UPDATE!!!!!!!!!! Please! ^__^
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heyy,
Well...what can I say? This fic of yours is deviously amazing! I love it's unique-ness...especially the gambling/casino/romance factors. I hope to see another chapter soon. Keep up the great work! So until next,
Claire ^_^