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THAT SICK DISCUSTING PERVERT HO-HOW-HOW COULD THAT BE AN EXCUSE TO DO SOME THING LIKE THAT!!! NARAKU!!!!!! UHRGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG!!!!1 HOW I DESPISE THAT MAN-NO-DIRT! HE'S NOT EVEN WORTHY TO BE THE DIRT BETWEEN MY TOES!!!!! AND KAGOME SHE STILL SEEMS TO THINK THE WORLD OF HIM!?!?!?!? HURMPH! P.S. I STILL WANT A KAG/INU/? 3SUM

Yeah lemon! Hah. And an intensly good one at that. I cant believe that was your first time writing one. -applaudes-. Good job. It was funny. After I finished reading the lemon I was like 'whats going to happen when shes supposed to go home! She cant go home!' and then the very next part was him asking her to stay and not go home. I was like hah. Yes. Well anyways. Yet another very nice chapter, Im excited for the next one. I love how their so long and how you update every day. Its awesome. Anyways. Yes. Im very curious to know what Kagome and Miroku are talking about. Something to do with her dad? Was he by any chance Naraku? Considering hes not in the story yet and all (if you're even planning on having him in there at all that is). Tell us soon! o.0

- Drew

Wow. Okay. Me again. And just incase you are like me and were thinking I thought your lemon was funny, no. I was talking about how it was funny that I was thinking about what was going to happen when she was supposed to leave and about how the very next part of your story cleared that up. Although, not to say you were thinking that. I have to admit at times that I can be quite the stupid girl (hah) and I probably would have though that. -smacks self- Anyways Im going to stop talking now. Heh.

- Drew

wow so its like that. uh-huh........... i get it!!!!!! so far i really enjoy it except with the whole koga thing.

if sesshy's gonna be in tha story, will rin ? i hope she is !

Great Chapter! I really thought that Kagome and Inuyasha were going to break up! Not like they're really together...like she said, they don't really know each other that much. But it was still great! Keep up the wonderful work and update soon!!! Ja ne!

excellent chappy. very thrilled with how that turned out. ohhh...baka Kagome....in front of all of those guys...epp? ins't the cut throat business under teh rules of 'if you show weakness, they kill you?' can't be good. no plots agianst yasha boy, rigth? ::pleading eyes:: heheheh...kidding, mind you. not a bad alley to travel. as for the hotel thing, LOL, i'm sorry...i must have been rather ambigious with my review. i know the casino is below the hotel (much like alantic city and vegas, both of which are AMAZING) but i meant when she returns home home, back to her residence, what happens? is this all in tokyo, where she lives normally or are they visiting foreign places, like Kyushu or Beppu city? (sorry, places i love). GREAT story and as for Sango being the comic releif, i thought it was great that the bartender came after her. at first, i swore up and down you were speaking about Koharu but being that she isn't a demon, i was a bit lost as to who it was but still...wonderful. loved it. and fluffykins...well...he's always been a god of few words so...hey....it works well. great story, keep it up!!!!

yay! you updated. that was fast, most authors don't bother to update till like 6 months later. well good chapter, hope you update soon, again.
keep up the good work.

you, have to, have to update soon!

don't worry about cliche, just go with what fits your story. this fit the story wonderfully. great lemon, BTW, and i understand what you mean about wondering what to put and what not to put in the scene, i had the same issue on the first one i wrote. it gets easeir. LOL. wonderful chapter, i love how Kouga set up the whole shabang just to get a go at Kagome, which doesn't make TOO much sense now, but i'm sure it will. (meaning he's some 'hot' actor that chicks flaunt their bodies at, why kagome? then agian...look to the show. LOL. baka Kouga...baka baka baka). i can't wati to see where you go with that one. as for the demon yasha boy, i love it. sexy, loving, and was in semi control of himself. i haven't toyed wiht that thought yet, making him wall out but you did a GREAT job with it. i can only guess how angry Miroku is going to be about that whole scene. wonderful chapter and update. you threw me with the term 'daddy' and have me wondering. hmm...the super senses are going haywire. lol. i'll figure it out, give me another chapter. LOL. GREAT story, keep it up!!!