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March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOT DAMN, I GOT IT!! ^___^ *does dance* Wheeeee!!! hey, so do I get pocky for getting Naraku right??? HUH!!!
DO I!!! O___O;
he he....anyways, GREAT STORY AND I LOVE THE SPEED OF YOUR UPDATES!
Keep rockin' the world! ^_~
sexykagome03
Oh, and could I ask a little favor? Maybe you could read my story one day and tell me what you think of my lemons? Thank you so much!
DO I!!! O___O;
he he....anyways, GREAT STORY AND I LOVE THE SPEED OF YOUR UPDATES!
Keep rockin' the world! ^_~
sexykagome03
Oh, and could I ask a little favor? Maybe you could read my story one day and tell me what you think of my lemons? Thank you so much!
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March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aw Man! You killed the Wolf!!!! That was DAMN gutsy!!!! I almost cried. Almost. Well I was wrong. It wasn't Hojo. Damn. No virtual pocky for me. Shoot. NEWayz great chapter! Keep up the great work and update soon! Pretty please?
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March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
and here i thought inu/sessh dad died.....LOL hahahas and its like no wonder my friend called me a crackhead. ANYWAYS....FINALLY the girls get to party without the guys! hahahahahs i really like the humor when inu and miroku played go fish and watch black beauty at the same time...i thought they were going to play poker and bet using money and shiet hahahas anyways UPDATE =D
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March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And yet again, two other well-written chapters (5 AND 6). I love it! Awesome plot-twisters by the way. So what else is up your sleeve? I'm anxiously anticipating more of this GREAT story. So until then,
Claire ^_~
Keep up all the amazing work!!!!
Claire ^_~
Keep up all the amazing work!!!!
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March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay for good chapters!!! yay!!! so...fluffy has yet again impaled inuyasha? hehehehe....that alwasy seems to happen to the poor kid....(i did it too, LOL). really good chapter, i can understand where your road blocks are coming up. i love the idea of daddy getting involved...hehehehe....that will definatly prove intresing. (how would he feel about inu sleeping with a 'theif'?) or for that matter, Kago returning home to find daddy dearest waiting for her and having to return to inu or naraku finds his way to the casino? eep!!! (Naraku versus inu no tashio...royal rumble!!! woot!!!) hehe. great chappy and keep it up, the story is amazing!!!!!
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March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
best fing story ever
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March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn!! Two great chaps. Nice lemon, and a HOLY SHIT!!! ending in chapter 6. So naraku was Kagome's dad huh? and he tried to rape her? what a sick fuck. ant wait for the next chapter
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March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yey~! another chapter well done..im glad kouga...got shot LOL is he really dead? or like inuyasha just shot him and leave him out to suffer? though im glad kagome purified him shitless...hahahas anyways please update =D
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March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa, totally blindsided! I didnt even think a little bit that perhaps Kouga was hired. But Im almost completely positive I can guess by who... Hehe. It wouldnt happen to be Inuyasha's older brother, would it? That is my guess. Yes. Im pretty positive that it is. [ Watch me be wrong and it wont be ]. Another very nice chapter. So sad to see Kouga go but in all actuality I feel very little to no remorse. He just made a good bad guy. Although you seem to have many more in this story [ or at least one more whos still alive ] so its all very good. Very very good. Also [ although it wasnt as suprising ] nice ending. I was close with the secret!! Although, I thought he was still alive and was going to resurface later in the story, but I was close. Im suprised that not many people guessed that option. Cant wait for the next chapter!
- Drew
- Drew
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March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
.... ..... ... . uhhh.....hmm. i'm kind of sitting here with a 'crap' and yet a rather 'duh, how didn't i see that' look on my face. plot twists, ey? i say the evil plot bunnies had their way with you!! bad, bad plot bunnies. well, from the first sentence, “You have failed.” i knew it was fluffykins who set yash up...don't ask me how, i just knew it. shaking my head, i read that thing going, oh sesshiles, what did you do? not cool...not cool at all. cause that means that sesshiles has to die adn that is...uhh....not cool? i love fluffles!!! ::silently sobbing:: damn baka...damnit, he needs a subjigation spell!!!! down boy ::see Sesshoumaru fall to floor:: bastard. GRRR. as for throwing Naraku in...i was very.........intrigued....to see that you made him her father. not a comon thing done (cause he's naraku and that's...weird....) but i see the whole brain tumor thing flying very well....see Narkau in a corner talking to himself like golumn out of Lord of the Rings. eep!!! so....her father nearly raped her and Miroku killed him to protect her? deep....very fuckin deep. good for Roku...just....ouch. specially since while InuYasha would never rape Kagome, there is still the sliver of comparison between his taking lives and that bastard. nothing that can bode well...specially if Kag finds Kouga's blood on Inus hands, metaphorically speaking, mind you. ouch....just....ouch. not gonna pretty in angst town, that's for sure. i love that inu asked Kag to come stay with him but honeslty, how SAFE can that be, specially with sneaky bastards like fluffykins lurking around. hmmm......... anywho's, great plot twists, love them all. intrested to see where you run with this and just how Kagome deals with all of it. poor kid. great story, as alwasy!!!