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person anime fan
schedule April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was so fucking awesome! i just started reading this story last night. and Inuyasha's dad was hilarious.
anyways... update soon, so i can read more!

~Anime fan~
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schedule April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O_o . wooooooowwwww. i think i woudl have shot myself long ago if he was my father. ROTF LMAO. that was just tooo good. i think the silver, for this man, is truely blond. LOL. i laughed forever over the 'i'm sesshoumaru' lines while their wonderful father kept mixing that up. that is just too wrong. LOL. i feel so bad for the boys...no wonder why sesshiles wants inu dead...but i think going after the dad would be higher on the list of 'things to kill'. LOL. the cat being drown?? that is jsut so wrong on so many levels. inu in comparison to a neko. that's great!!!! very well done...i'm happy to see you updated. honestly, i realized like the next day after leaving my last review that naraku was dead and kept meaning to add an annotation on that but never did. you know, when i think of the character you portrayed the father as, i see some little old godfather type man. ::what is a stoned goldfish???:: anyway, great chapter!!!!
person Mysterious AM
schedule April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Because of the fact that I haven't read much, if any, fanfiction in months, along with the fact that it's been even longer since I've read any fanfiction on this particular webiste, chances were slim that I'd just happen to find and read your story today. But I'm so glad that I did, because I really, really enjoyed all eight chapters almost from the moment I started reading! It really captured my attention right off the bat and kept me hooked the whole way though, and now I'm terribly sad that there isn't anymore left so that I can continue reading and find out what happens next. I mean, what a place to leave it! With the card game coming up, and then the mess with the mentioned 'ceremony' and how Inuyasha is going to deal with explaining things, it should be very interesting!

I admit, I was a bit wary at first of your decription of Kagome and her penchant for gambling and such, because it really just doesn't fit in with her character and I had a hard time seeing how you could actually tie in those characteristics with how she normally is. But somehow, you managed to do it and I didn't roll my eyes even once, lol...

And I did really love some of the humor you managed to insert into the story. From Sango, Koharu, and the baseball bat, to just the way you managed to state small things in ways that made them humorous, it really gave a good balance to the story.

Overall I love it and I hope to see more of this story soon! Keep up the great work! ^_^
person OH U
schedule April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG how could u leave it there like that with us wondering what is going to happen with his brother and why his father was so mad about this cerimony thing dont leave us hanging on an evil cliffy UPDATE really soon
person Chokoreto
schedule April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
waahhh i miss you...and this story very much! hahahas anyways inu and sesshy's dad is like a hardkore mafia kind of guy....hahahs awsome! XD god...i cant believe he did that to BOTH sesshy AND inu.....-sigh- its getting good! love it XDD omg poor kagome....i mean its juss coffee! hahahas dog demon and their possessive...pickyness...god...i wonder what happen to Izayoi when Goro said he was single for THAT long...=\ hahahas anyways update!! XD
person maverick
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i want pocky......but i never get any cuz peoples are mean...T__T lol GREAT! i love the story!
person Kari
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love the story so far, love it love it love it. i hope u update soon please gotta know what happends!
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh...how I love getting wasted like the girls did....haha. Awesome...that's pretty much exactly what happens when I go out with my girls. ANYWAY awesome chapter. I hope Inuyasha's okay...and Sesshomaru to. I wonder what their father has to say. So until next, Keep up the great work!!!!
Claire ^_^
person Keke
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok, time for my review... I want to know what happens next... what about thair father???
person Hillary ( Biganimefan1 )
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so far so good! I love the part when the girls went out parting but it would have been so much better if the guys changed thier look and caught up to the girls and started hitting on them then ther girls really started to HIT on them. and to the threesome thing, could you make another story with kag and other guys ?? instead of other coupling threesome??