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May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
haha awesome chapter, it was really serious at first, i was that bastard InuYasha saying that to Kagome. i was sad :(, but she stood strong and faist the beast lol. sorry about my horrible spelling, and then the end haha was great i was laughing so hard ^_^ loved it. and i was so so so so very happy to see that u updated. i can't wait till u update again. i'm so excited.
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May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
loved the new chapter. inu becomming suspicious of kagome....hmm. i don't think anyone really questioned it because of how you drew the two characters and connected them together. there was no gray area to readers between the two, no hidden secrets or snags in teh relationship, besides for the fact that kagome was a cheater and inu a ...uhh...well, you know. LOL. but they fit together so wel, i woudl have sooner though seh would be agianst him (specially after the kouga thing). interesting though, i still think inu is his normal baka self at points. i would have liked to see more interaction between kaede and inu at the table. you set them up so perfectly to seem like a great scene then it was over. maybe soemthing to bring into later chapters. i find it interesting that kagome was going to try to get inu to read her wuthering hights...i just can't see him doing that. LOL. very well done chapter, loved it!!!
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May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have to comment on one of the last things you said before I forget, and then I'll get to my comments about your chapter.
Inuyasha being suspicous of Kagome is something that crossed my mind, but really, the thing that made me unconcerned about it is that you made it abundantly clear, being the type of story this is that deals with deceitfulness as much as it does, how easily Inuyasha could read her. When she was lying or was being underhanded, he always seemed to know (poor Kagome..I don't know what I'd do if I had someone able to read me THAT easily, lol). So I figured that was your angle to surpass that hurdle of the story, so it really wasn't something I focused strongly on.
Okay, now for comments, lol! Loved this chapter, and my favorite part was certainly with the books. Although when Inuyasha first showed her the library, after their argument earlier I half expected Kagome to turn to him and say "I know earlier I loved you for you, but I've changed my mind. Now I only love you for your books". ^_^ But then, that really sounds more like something I'D say...and I would, too. :P
Anyway, thank you for updating so quickly! I was so happy to see another chapter, and I'm hooked on it now more than ever. Please keep going with this story so I can find out how the ceremony goes and the game. Don't keep us in suspense long!
Inuyasha being suspicous of Kagome is something that crossed my mind, but really, the thing that made me unconcerned about it is that you made it abundantly clear, being the type of story this is that deals with deceitfulness as much as it does, how easily Inuyasha could read her. When she was lying or was being underhanded, he always seemed to know (poor Kagome..I don't know what I'd do if I had someone able to read me THAT easily, lol). So I figured that was your angle to surpass that hurdle of the story, so it really wasn't something I focused strongly on.
Okay, now for comments, lol! Loved this chapter, and my favorite part was certainly with the books. Although when Inuyasha first showed her the library, after their argument earlier I half expected Kagome to turn to him and say "I know earlier I loved you for you, but I've changed my mind. Now I only love you for your books". ^_^ But then, that really sounds more like something I'D say...and I would, too. :P
Anyway, thank you for updating so quickly! I was so happy to see another chapter, and I'm hooked on it now more than ever. Please keep going with this story so I can find out how the ceremony goes and the game. Don't keep us in suspense long!
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May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hahhas yay! you update! ahhh inuyasha was being a retard...jumping into conclusion and making something that is ENTIRELY bs! XD poor kagome at least she's strong enough NOT to cry XDD hmmm.....though imagining kaede being an AWSOME poker is really hard to imagine....but thats what makes her a pimpette LOL she rawks! hahaas i AGREE that inuyasha cheated juss cuz of his sense! hahas dogs these days! lol kagome should REALLY beat him up or purify him a bit...-nods- but i guess i'd call it even cuz she cheated too XD anyways good chapter....keep it up *mwahs*~!
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May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh i am soo glad u updated but please update agian
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May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that , yes it was an obvious plot twist... but one that worked. I thought the end scene for this chapter was perfictly done too. I can't wait to see what will happen next. I hopw you update soon.
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April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Omg! Inuyasha's dad is blonde! -_-; ugh...annoying creepy guy! O_o LoL. Funny "chemic"lol. Well, luved the chappier like always! ^_^ I'm waiting to see more and THANK YOU SO MUCH for reading my story! *bows*
~sexykagome03
~sexykagome03
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April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome...you updated! Great chapter. Keep it up. Loved Daishyo Goro's character...so much fun to read his speech. Well, I'm of very little words right now. So until next,
Claire ^_~
Claire ^_~
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April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg, i was so so so so so so very happy to see that u updated. i was cracking up in this chapter it was so funny, everything between the Inu family. the way you portraid InuYasha's dad is great he is so funny. i'm so happy to see that you are back, i can't wait till u update again i'll be waiting. so glad you are back ^_^
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April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay!! I was so worried that an update wouldn't come :) And I love Inu and Sesshy's dad, he's hilarious! Keep up the good work, you spectacular writer, you!