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March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh Ilove these side stories. I know it was illogical to think Rin would get a soul- bond, but can't she get reincarnated? Can we read about present-day Shippo in the next chapter? How did everyone acquire their wealth? Plundered? Hidden artifacts? Pawned their old belongs :) Can't wait for the update!
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March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please write again soon! I can't wait to find out what will happen.
Love your style!
S. F.
Love your style!
S. F.
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March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love it, love it, love it, like I have loved all of your wonderful stories. This is the first one I have caught before its completion, so now I find myself waiting in anticipation for each new chapter. Of all your works, this is the most thought - provoking one so far. I find myself considering the immense implications which such a situation could bring about. The well should have reopened when Kagome was born, & so, logically, Inuyasha could go back, & meet himself somewhere along the line. Imagine Kagome's reaction at meeting 2 Inuyashas, from 2 different timelines! It would be risky, though, as messing around with something in the past runs the risk of completely changing the future. Inu could go back & tell Kagome of what is to happen with the well, in which case, she would have the terrible choice of either staying in the feudal era, forever, or going back home, knowing she cannot return, when the time comes. It would be nice to think, though, that Inu & the others would anticipate her arrival in this world, & serve as her unseen guardians over the years, as they watch her grow into the young woman who would come to mean so much to all of them. I am eagerly awaiting the rest of the story, to see how you portray the situation. I am sure you will do it well, in the tasteful way in which you have written all your works so far. Well done!
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March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yayyyyyyy!!!!!!!!! more present time stories yayayayyaayay for u u rock
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March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow!!! this is great. i have all your fics and i thought that reassmebled is the last but you are continuing.... that's great. as the language it is okay, no mistakes. i can't wait to see what happens next...
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March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^__^ Glad to see you've continued this series. I thought for a while that reassembled was going to be the end, so I was very excited to see another sequel. Since I've never gotten around to reviewing you ( and man am I feeling guilty about that) I thought I'd make up for my lurking now. *ahem* What I love about your series:
1) It's original: Most of the themes, plot twists, ideas, pairings even (I blinked for 5 minutes straight at the first hints of Sango/Sesshomaru, I don't think I've ever seen that one before, and I'm surprised to find that I rather like it ^.^) are not commonly used, unlike a great deal of the stories on this site
2)It's believable: I don't think I've come across even one plot hole, and even some of my favourite authors have those occasionaly. While the characters have in some cases changed, you've managed to make that believable as well (The first OOC Inuyasha that hasn't made me cringe in quite some time, and I am *extremely* impressed with how you write Sesshomaru)
3)Good grammar, spelling and vocabulary: O.o are you quite certain English isn't your first language? I wouldn't have been able to tell if you hadn't mentioned it in you author's note. It's obvious you take care to make sure your writing is good, unlike many of the authors in the Inuyasha category. While I occasionally find a wording that is a bit odd, I never need to puzzle over a sentence to understand your meaning, (Unless of course you meant to do that by way of plot twist ^.^) and despite the urgings of your reviewers you take your time in updating.
4) I just love the way you write!
Thank you for your amazing stories!
Eagerly awaiting your next update,
Flash
1) It's original: Most of the themes, plot twists, ideas, pairings even (I blinked for 5 minutes straight at the first hints of Sango/Sesshomaru, I don't think I've ever seen that one before, and I'm surprised to find that I rather like it ^.^) are not commonly used, unlike a great deal of the stories on this site
2)It's believable: I don't think I've come across even one plot hole, and even some of my favourite authors have those occasionaly. While the characters have in some cases changed, you've managed to make that believable as well (The first OOC Inuyasha that hasn't made me cringe in quite some time, and I am *extremely* impressed with how you write Sesshomaru)
3)Good grammar, spelling and vocabulary: O.o are you quite certain English isn't your first language? I wouldn't have been able to tell if you hadn't mentioned it in you author's note. It's obvious you take care to make sure your writing is good, unlike many of the authors in the Inuyasha category. While I occasionally find a wording that is a bit odd, I never need to puzzle over a sentence to understand your meaning, (Unless of course you meant to do that by way of plot twist ^.^) and despite the urgings of your reviewers you take your time in updating.
4) I just love the way you write!
Thank you for your amazing stories!
Eagerly awaiting your next update,
Flash
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March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad that you are back! I've been anxiously awaiting the next staage in the story - it looks great so far...
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March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Your back. I was hoping that you would continue. I had been to your website and saw that you had a fic in the making. I could hardly contain my excitment. Update as soon as possible. ;)