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March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
VERY well written for a first fic.
Personally I love it!, I know the cop thing has been done(never read one, but have seen them) but yours started out very promising. THe training scene had me rolling.
only read 1st chap, but I hope you have INU with a brain and not too big of and ass in the story!
Personally I love it!, I know the cop thing has been done(never read one, but have seen them) but yours started out very promising. THe training scene had me rolling.
only read 1st chap, but I hope you have INU with a brain and not too big of and ass in the story!
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March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhh chap 2-love how you have them acting mature, hate when people take them in a AU and no matter what the situation haveing them acting like their back in the fedual era. I like the personalities! It fits the story and plot
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March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this story rocks... update soon!!! LoL
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March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey!!! your the girl from mediaminer!!! I SO LOVE YOUR STORY!!! ALL OF THEM!!! THEY TOTALLY ROCK!!! PLEASE UPDATE!!!