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::hands flailing about in the air:: i do! i do!!!! hehe. great story, wonderful twist on using Juuromaru and Kageroumaru...asses the both of em, but never the less intresting foes to pick from. ::sigh:: i love this story. it's so....fresh. never read anything like it and i love the formalities...cause you know they are all but ripping inside at that. hehe...inuyasha was gonna make sure she stayed at the office, wasn't he. uhh..huh.....that could really lead to some 'unprofessional' positions in the work place. ::covers mouth and widens eyes: oh no! heheheheheh. great story, really really wonderful plot and you have me on the edge of my chair. intresting idea of the ink place wiht all of the artificts. at first i was figuring the old dude to be totosai but he was to sane to be him. LOL. great story and i really can't wiat to see what you do next. woot woot for inu and kag. (hehe...now inu can 'see' all of the disadvantages having only one good hand can do him....ain't karma a bitch? LOL..so qouteith the lord of the western lands). hehehehhe.

Okay, I've read your entire story so far and I must say it's brilliant. I love it! It's unique but in a good way, ya know? Please update soon. If you don't I'll be forced to take drastic measures. *Laughs evilly*

what happened to all the reviews?

I just read ch1 and im liking it.
it has a sense of reality......pretty good so far.
im really enjoying it

awesome chap!!! Update soon!!!

wow...my mouth dropped when i read that it was Rin that was kidnapped. that is SOO not coool...or good...or both. poor girl, i swear if naraku hurts her...ugh, i'll jump through this freaking screen and strangle him!!!! GRR! i'm trying to peice this together slowly, but i'm hitting dead ends as well. So, kikyo was the first victem? nicely done. now, if we follow along with ideas of teh show, then Kagura is the missing link betwen the group but she has little to do with the other victims, or does she? ::strokes chin:: and Naraku must have known the relation between InuYasah and Sesshoumaru...so now if he kills Rin and InuYasha captures him, the baka expects for inuyasha to let him go so Kagome is safe...is he sick???? LOL. GREAT story so far, you have me on the edge of my seat. now i'm sure i was reading into this to much but catching It’s an old sentiment from the demon ye know as Inuyasha with the demon statement, i am slowly wondering. are they truely human, or covering for teh demon side? if so, jakens comment makes sense. hmm.. GREAT FREAKIN STORY!!! keep it up!!!

DUDE JUST READ 7 & 8!!!

it gets better and better.

DONT LEAVE ME HAnGING!!

wow...great freakin story. i'm up till 4am, FYI, reading it. LOL. i love it...never really read anything like it honestly. i love how some people can successfully transpose these wonderful characters into alternate situations...much like how you have...and make it work. GREAT JOB!!! i can't wait to see what 'spider guy' ::cough::naraku ::cough:: is plotting and man, i normally don't go for the sweet jack ass inuyasha's but yours has swept me off my feet. great job, keep it up!!!!!

IM FREAKING LOVING THIS STORY< THE CASE,THE ROMANCE, ITS AWSOME!!!
dont stop now!!!!!

I MUST KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!

i love it when authors love their chapters! good for you! and no, i am not being sarcastic. i liked this fic. its cute!