rate_review Reviews

Whoa....I think I'm in love with this story. Great plot, a very good interpretation of the characters and their personalities, excellent references to the show without being corny about it, not to mention plenty of steam. ;) great job so far, I look forward to the next chapter. And btw, Kagome cussing Flufy out was awesome! I hope you find the writing spark again soon. Good luck.

well i really like your fic and I think it's the shit. anyone who says otherwise can just fuck off and die.

I like your writing, and it's crazy aweosme. hwenever you start to write again, I look forward to it.

Hope all goes well in the meantime <3

hun, the story is amazing, and anyone who says that 'you suck' is full of it and merely jealous of the talent. every peice of this is wonderful. i can understand how life can really suck wind at points, and how everything seems to be going stright to the fires of hell. i've been there...i'm sure anyone over the age of 18 has been ther.e don't worry though, cause everyone loves your story, its great and you have your readers to lean on for support. hell, i'm always willing to chat if you need to vent. but honestly, the story is amazing, keep up with it. take the time you need but don't let anyone flame you telling you that this isn't one of the best peices of lit on here!!!

Hey awesome story you've got going here. I think you've got super writing skills. Your talent astounds me. If I'm being overly dramatic don't take it personal. I'm a drama queen and I'm just trying to say I love your fic PLEASE UPDATE SOON! EK!

Haha! I love this. And though this Myouga situation implies that he's found out about their relationship, I'm putting my money on the thought that it's not their relationship he's found, but their snooping around about Houjou's case. If not...I'm wrong again. ^_^ Can't wait for another update.

I loved your story it was wonderful but, please update i'm waiting to see what happens next cause i just can't wait.^-^

...AGH!!! it ends there??? i mean...right...there?? LOL. dear god, thats a good cliffy! i don't say this often but damnit, i want to know! what does the boss think they are up to? drinking on the job is one thing, LOL. that or something to do with the old guy or Hojo. not sure. i don't think its as obvious as your making it. LOL. but then agian, i could be wrong. great chapters and let me say, WONDERFUL description wtih naraku and his evil evilness. creepy. double creepy actually. ::shivers:: very good. very good indeed. man, i can't wait to see what is his deal. something is wrong with him....where did he come from, how did he resurrect. i love how you have done his character. amazing. keep it up!!!!

To whomever flammed this wonderful story: In the words of kagome, "GO FUCK YOURSELF!"

I, myself, am loth to give out comliments, exspecially to lemon stories. I think them usually a means for an author/ess to release some sexual tension. (But I read them all the same when I am too lazy to write my own..Ah, the guilty pleasure) But I commend you for the excellent job!

Not only is there a good (Oh kami-sama! A good plot!!) plot, there is tasteful and well-written lemon content. The story doesn't end with the commensement of such sexual activities, but keeps going on with a well-developed storyline.

8/10 here, only points off because I'm a bitch and I never give out anything higher. If and when I decide to even bother reviewing.

Forget about any and all flames. They're just all jelous, and besides.....my opinion counts for twelve. Because I'm just that cool and I don't mind being egotistical.

Please keep going! (And keep up the lemons, too....HEY! We're all a little hentai here!)

great chapter....
UPDATE SOON!!!

Hi! i really love you story!!! it has the whole CSI/Crime Detectives type of vibe!! very good expecally since i love csi and crime scene shows!! :D:D plz keep updating! your really good!!!