rate_review Reviews

WOW. i SOO didn't see links pulling together from the past. that one seriously blind sided me in the best of ways. the minute i saw the ever famous 'kaze no kizu' line, i felt like my damn heart stopped!!! WONDERFUL, AMAZING, AWESOME...i'm not sure else i can say. this story is just mind blowing, seriously one of my top ten favorites of all time. just magnificant!!! i really can't get over how you linked this all together and all. naraku makes complete sense, and that was great!!! i love how he knows and can remember when the others can't. its like, haha, i got a secret that reincarnation does work!! LOL. very very well done. you get props and a standing ovation!!!

I really love your story! You don't suck, although sorry to hear about you being so stressed, I hope things get better!

amazing chapters (17 and 18) I'm glad you're gonna continue! I can't wait for what you write next <3

Wonderful Story! Well written and obviously well thought out. I can't wait for the following chapters! Keep up the excellent work!

I'm sorry you're having such a tough time now. I hope it clears up soon, but I just want you to know that you don't suck, and if people are giving you nasty responses (not just constuctive criticism, but flames) then that's their problem. Sure, everyone could do a few things better, and no one on AFF.net is shakespeare or anything, (at least I don't THINK so), but that doesn't give people the right to be rude. You can't really do much to stop it, but don't think people have the right to treat you badly. For what it's worth, I think this story is pretty darn good. I think this is an excellant AU, and you've done some great work. Now, as for your job and your family, my sympathy, but it's just tragic that you don't enjoy writing anymore. That's no good, especially when you're so good at it. Please don't give up something you love just because of a few people who are missing some critical social skills.
Best regards,
MD

you updated!!! I loved this chapter, and please update soon

I've been reading this story on ff.net so I was very happy to find it here. (Why the flames?) I enjoy your writing a lot and you manage to really bring out the chemistry between Inuyasha and Kagome. I know how it is when life seems to suddenly pour down on you. Take some time to yourself. No one is paying you to do this. I would hope you are writing it out of the enjoyment of writing rather than feeling obligated. Creativity is hard. Not everyone seems to understand that. Someone once flamed a story of mine and claimed I wanted to be the character....even though I had explained it was based on a historical figure. Sometimes I really wonder about people......other times, I don't think I want to know.
I hope things start looking up for you! :)

Hello there I just wanted to say that even if some people want to flame you I won't. I'm sorry about the problems that your having and hope that they get better really damn soon. I've read all that you have written and believe they're great stories, especially this one. Especially this last chapter I laugh so loud I really scared myself. Go figure?!?! Any way the ending of the chapter was beautiful as well. Please have more confident in yourself as a writer. Flames happen and sometimes it hurts. But as it was said before you can either take it or leave it? Which do you prefer? If you want my two cents and even if you don't I don't care cause I'm going to give it anyway, for me its shove it or eat shit and die!! Or you can just take what you wrote in the story and I quote "GO FUCK YOURSELF"!! HahahahahahahHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAH!!!!!!!!!

Hope things get better for you and hope you get the spirit back into writing your stories. I hate to see stories like these in the air with no endings when there are such pieces of shit out there with endings and I just wonder who hell told them in the first place it was good. * Starts to rant* Whatever?!
Anyway Good luck with your endeavors and hoping to see your writing and your confident back up soon. *crosses all finger and eyes*

I meant fingerS.

I love your story. I think it's great! I'm sorry to read that you got flames. I hope you keep writting.