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im so sry ur life is wat u described!! dont give up writing! somepeople still do love ur stories. for pete''s sake **** whoeveer thats causeing ur life to ruin and do wat u do best
ur best fan

Hmm, I kinda thought this sounded dumb from the summary (as a summary it's fine, it was the content) but the writing seems good and I;m very lightly hooked. Maybe.

OMFG! i COMPLETELY AND UTTERLY ADORE YOUR STORY! iT KILLED ME WHEN i HAD TO GO PICK UP MY SISTER AND THEY WERE ABOUT TO DO IT AND i HAD TO WAIT UNTIL i CAME BACK! i'M LIKE "pLEASE! i MUST READ STORY!" tHEN WHEN i FINALLY READ IT i'M LIKE THANK YOU!!! lOL. aNYWAYS, i LOVE YOUR STORY SOOOO MUCH BECASUE YOU KNOW WHAT YOU WRITE., a LOT OF THE fbi POLICE STORIES OUT THERE HAVE NO REAL REFERANCE THEY'RE JUST PEOPLE WHO ARE LIKE HEY, LETS MAKE THEM INTO POLIC EPEOPLE! hELLLO! aND PLUS i LOVED THE MOTORCYLCE DEAL! yOU KNOW MUCH ABOUT THEM, NO? bECASUE USUALLY PEOPLE SAY AND WANT iNU TO HAVE A MOTORCYLCE WHEN THEY'VE NEVER BEEN ON ONE THEMSELVES! mY BOYFRIEND HAS ONE AND i JUST ADORE THEM! aND THE FIRST TIME THEY MADE LOVE IT KIND OF MADE ME SAD FOR ME...i WAS LIKE WHY COULDN'T i LOVE SOMONE THAT DEEPLY?! bUT DON'T WORRY, i'M BETTER NOW ^^WOW I JUST REALIZED I'VE BEEN WRITING IN ALL CAPATILS AND SINCE ITLL BE A BITCH TO GO BACK AND RE-WRITE THIS ILL JUST SAY IT BECASUE OF MY ENTHUSISAM! I SIMPLY ADORE YOU A SA WRITER AND ANYONE WHO FLAMES YOU IS JUST ENVIOUS OF YOUR ABILITIES! tHEY HAVE NO RIGHT TO IT SIMPLY IMMATURE, SO IM GLAD YOU DIDN'T SINK TO THERE LEVEL AND START SAYING BAD THINGS ABOUT THEM. i LOVE YOU AND YOUR STORY SO MUCH HUN! PLEASE END IT!!!!!!

Lolz. I did feel bad for Kouga. But oh well!!!!!!!!!!! Lovely chapter, as usual.

Awwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!! That was so sweet and romantic. It might have been too soon but hey, they were destined for each other. Fascinating work. Keep it up.

OMG that was a freakin hilarious chapter. I quote from Sango, "Kagome....YOU HAD SEX! My favorite line. You're a great author and no matter what other say, keep writing your stories. I love them- that's got to mean something.

............she lost the baby? OMG SHE LOST THE BABY!!!!!!!!! I started to cry when I read that part. It was so sad. Sad but great chapter.

Awesome beginning. I think I'm going to like this one.

Fantastic chapter like always. I don't need to say no more....I'm not worthy......with all that said- UPDATE SOON!!!!!

Woah. Inuyasha is totally out of character. But that's OK cuz lots of stories seem to have it now. Come on, everybody is doing it! Great chapter by the way.