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Hm... so... what happens next? Can't wait for your update. This is really good.

Now this will prove interesting :)

Please update soon. I love it!

Oh, that was a delicious beginning! Your writing is very good and it sounds like this is going to be an intensely enjoyable story. I wonder if Naraku had any inkling of what he was unleashing when he set this plan in motion! And if this is to be torture does that mean he will only tease her with no release? I guess I'll have to find wait until you update to know that.

Kohaku & Kagura... *snicker* I love the premise! Ooooh boy! Don't worry too much about the age thing - I think in the manga he is like, 13 or so... and we all know that 13 year old boys are not so very innocent. Heck, 13 year old GIRLS are not so very innocent...

Wow, well that's definately a hook and something very different, which is refreshing. Most of the stuff around here is the same Kag/Inu or Kag/Sesshy, or Sess/Rin.

I love Kagura, personally... I wonder what her reaction to the 'torture' is going to be... *grin* Kohaku may be young, but he is a cutie - especially with that lightly freckled nose.

Only thing is you might want to check the formatting a little, since the words seem to wrap a little funny. Other than that, good job girl, and it'll be interesting to see where you are going with this. I can't wait. (I'm such a hentai!)

--julie