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Great story , I loved it and I hope you continue to a chapter 4 , maybe Kagura's payback or something

:3 i loved the story!

wow really good. please update soon. i loved it

I love it! Please continue this great story.

Damn girl.. that was really good... and I have to give you props for using the most, er, creative line I've seen in hentai fanfics yet = "He ran just the very tip of his tongue from her neck across her breast leaving a trail, like a hentai snail across a marble maiden in a garden"

LOL

Betcha you could sell those snails on ebay for a hefty profit! :)

Seriously - great job. You should do a sequel! (I'm going to channel my inner Randy Jackson for a moment): That was da BOMB!

Ooooh! I just read chapter 2 and I'll be hitting 3 in just a moment. I really like your insights into the characters. You have put a lot of thought into their motivations and personalities and it is reflected in the story making it deeper than just some fun smuttiness. However, it is still fun and it is still smutty which is highly enjoyable. There were many details I admired like the way you compared her scent to Nightshade and Belladonna. I find many authors, myself included, using sakura or jasmine. It isn't that there is anything wrong with that, but I wanted to used this point to illustrate that I find your use of description to be original and creative. Ok, on to chapter 3.

Ahhh, truly awsome story...
More stories like this one is needed :) Odd pairings... yeah.. more of those please...

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR ALL THE REVIEWS I LOVE YOU PEOPLE!!!!!! A quick note about Nightshade and Belladonna flowers they are actually of the same family of flowers and are both very toxic. Nightshade was used in worship of Baccuss in orgies and Belladonna is used in nerve gas even today. I figured since she smells like Naraku you know it's gotta be deadly. But since even she dosen't like the stench of his miasma then it must have it's own odor.

A interesting web site on these poisonous flowers is http://www.nopotato.com/What%20are%20Nightshade%20Plants.htm

Wonderfully done. I mean, you turned impossible to highly believable in just a few chapters. Even your characterization of Naraku was highly accurate. It is just like him to want to kill two birds with one stone. He tried it with Inuyasha and Kikyo, though sadly (at least to him) it failed when Kagome came back (in the sense that Kikyo's soul recides in her) and released InuYasha after a mere fifty years. That only worked temporarly for him. His plans also backfired when he sent that demon exterminator to attack Inuyasha and she ended joining their little group. BUT NOW.... he finally had both birds die: Kagura begged, and his puppet is somehow now a little tainted.


Wouldn't mind reading more from you.... this was amazing.

I like!!! I could see a story like this ending at this point, but I really hope you are continuing it. The corruption or attempted corruption of Kohaku is such an interesting prospect. Most stories are done from the perspective of the Inuyasha group even when "the bad guys" are brought in they are usually seen through the eyes of at least one of the other characters. I think that is another reason this story is so unique.

In other thoughts, I think you should jump on Atropa's round robin (that is the actual name of the story if you look for it). I just wrote chapter three and I would love to see where you would take the story from there. I'm glad you reviewed my stories, or I probably never would have noticed this story. I don't mean that as an insult. I just don't read Inuyasha as much as I used to so it would have been easy to miss.

Anyway, I love the story. And, wow, you are fast with the updates!