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for Moments We'd Rather Forget...

by Gyousei

person fallenangel7583
schedule March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow...yeah, those really are some GREAT moments that people would just LOVE to forget. i died at the thought of poor chibi InuYasha and the 'incident' with thier father. i don't think it could have been written better. great outburst for Sesshoumaru to crack up and a good way to start a brotherhood...LMAO. as for Sango...wow. that would just...suck. i can so see poor Miroku staning on the front yard about to have heart failure over that one. GREAT job with these one acts...keep em going. you really got a good thing here. :-)
person FayeMegan
schedule March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww the third one was so cute! good job. hope too see more ;)
schedule March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww I loved the first chapter ..I thought it was good ..please keep going with this.. 0,0’ Nice job!!
person Nick F.
schedule March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! Those are so, so funny lol. I especially love the last one. Kids these days *amused smile*
Can you do one very, very awkward moment between Hojo and Inuyasha (at Kagome's school, perhaps)? That will be most entertaining!
person kinky lurker
schedule March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg, that was so fucking funny! i love the idea of this story and i love the way you've written it! it's funny, original and well done.

you've written it so believably, even though we're looking at inuyasha characters... it's so great. and i love it!

ja ne!
~hanyou-elf
schedule March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG I love chapter 2..so realistic. .and funny as hell!! Please keep going with this. .love it good job!!