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for Moments We'd Rather Forget...

by Gyousei

schedule March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You know, I was going to dodge under the review radar on this one, just cause it's like 1am and I’m beaten tired. Then I read that someone left some good ideas and wanted to see if they were in your review section...and then I got grasp on the last review left for you and needless to say, it boiled my blood. For some lame uneducated baka to leave such a heinous review, I felt the need to rebuke it myself. There is nothing more in this world I hate then ignorant, self righteous little pricks who are obviously inept to conquer their own talent of self control that they feel the need to pick on someone else’s well performed talent of creating such an aesthetic masterpiece, simply to try to regain just a shred of dignity at the end of the night for themselves. Guess what, those who do that fail…they go to bed a jackass, they wake up a jackass and will become nothing in life more so then a waste of breath in the space time continuum. Pond scum fairs better on the hierarchy of respect. For someone, though, to so ignorantly flame you using improper English, lack the basic third grade grammar skills to properly construct a sentence using verbs and adjectives and then make a point that in no way, shape or form leads to any part of the text… I believe this to be the most indignant flame I have ever seen; one that deserves constant mockery for the rest of that pathetic ingrates life.

I feel I should say, on behalf of the aff.net community (or at least those who have any sense of taste) that what you are doing here is well thought out and well appreciated. You have sought out in culture true to life events that actually happen and taken a twist to superimpose our most loveable characters into them. It’s amazing and honestly a talent and idea I myself wish I had thought of. It is new, it is fresh and it is appreciated and DO NOT let some arrogant little snot nosed punk who is probably under the age of 12 deter you. Power to you and your writing and keep it up!!!
person Musha
schedule March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sesf doesnot have blond white hair.
Matter of fact theres no yellow in his hair.
person Alice M.
schedule March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh God! That was funny!!!! =D
person Ashes
schedule March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ROFLMAO! OOH! I liked that last one!! Totally humiliating! Keep em coming!
schedule March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4 was great…and so true of happening!! I love these. .please keep them coming!!! ^_^
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww chapter 3 was great also.. Specially the pee-pee dance..2 funny. .please continue on with this. .lovin it!!
person thebigguy
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thats f'ed up! The date, thats, just... im speachless. How embarassing.
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yes, that is most definatly one of the MOST embarassing things to EVER happen to a girl. dear god....how did i know it was going there to. i just had this feeling. UGH. poor girl....:-X great update!!
person Kellie
schedule March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great little stories. Is it possible to one with Kagome and maybe Naraku? Anyway, keep up the great work ^__^
person Nocturne22
schedule March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is really great! Please keeep on writing and update soon! I'd also like to see who was standing outside Sango's window. Miroku perhaps?