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for Moments We'd Rather Forget...

by Gyousei

person drake220
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my god, i can't breathe!!!! i seriously love you!! oh, i adored this.
person drake220
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my god! my little brother did that once! my dad was being all sweet and loving and the kid peed all over him. you definitely know children. no better description of the pee-pee dance then the one you gave. hehe. and it was so sweet!
person drake220
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh
my
god....................
THAT WAS TERRIBLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOT ONE FEMALE EVER DESERVES THAT. i pity kikyo. ::shudder:: dear god...
person drake220
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
my god, you are SADISTIC!!!!!!
i love it!
person drake220
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well, embarassing stories huh? how about one between kaede and inuyasha? i just keep picturing kaede walking in at the wrong time and just being all blase about it. theres my idea anyways. please do an embarassing moment for miroku. i want one badly....please!?!?! and wheres my peeping tom?!?!?!
person Anvil
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay, for you. I had to reread it 'cause i missed
a line--- completely throwing me off. But, yeah,
it was cool. Poor Kagome... well, no--- she needs
a bit of embarassment every once in a while.
person Jessie
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, these are hilarious...
person dani
schedule March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG THIS IS AWESOME!!! WOOT WOOT! lol. ironic. we read silas marner last semester. i read about the first 2chapters and then got the spark notes, haha! lol. but i LOVE your stories!! keep writing.!
person Anvil
schedule March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1 and 4 were the best. You made me guffaw.
Good for you.
schedule March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 5..Another great chapter…I myself have blurted something out to a teacher...that I really shouldn’t have...sooo this is so true and realistic...ohh brought back memories!!! Good job!! Please keep them coming!! 0,0'