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for Moments We'd Rather Forget...

by Gyousei

person aninufancalledky
schedule May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SO FUCKING FUNNY WOULD PAY TO SEE THAT IN MANGA FORM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!you show talent and have the brass balls to write this kind of funny shit! my advice: call fox they eat that shit up........
person an inu fan called ky
schedule May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well this series is very funny i think one involving shippo and rin being caught doing something by inuyasha and sesshomaru
would be one of those priceless moments.

sensual pack of condoms: 5$

motel room:40$ an hour

catching your kid in the room next to you screwing your enemy's son: priceless!

P.S.It's good to see the almighty sesshomaru knocked down a peg once in a while
schedule May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha!! Poor Inuyasha and Hojo. Oh the things that happen when we sneak off to do things! Hahaha 2 funny!!
person fallenangel7583
schedule May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it took me nearly ten minutes to finish this chapter. after hearing Hojo moan Kagome's name, i just hid under the table (you think i'm kidding?). that had me laughing so freaking hard. poor hanyou. i think it's great that he jumped hojo for it (hehe, bout time) but man....i really never hope Miroku gets down wind of that (but i'm sure he would have) that is just to GREAT!!!!! yay for updates!!!!!!!
schedule May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Your story is really funny! For me the best part is about sango being in the restaurant with her familie. how old is she? are miruku and sango becoming a couple?
person Dani (weezer chi)
schedule May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol, yeah. silas marner taught me the proper way of using sparknotes, hahaha.

i liked this one, too.. ehehe ^_^
person Dani (weezer chi)
schedule May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! AHAHAHA!! that was great!
person deep serenity
schedule April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very good frist chap,and very realistic, thank you for that! I enjoy a little smut more when the writer actually knows what their talking about good job
person deep serenity
schedule April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
owww, chap two was cute, so far I like how you are keeping them real but not extra smutty (lol, wink unless it's called for later) good job and I plan to keep reading.
person deep serenity
schedule April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
chap 3, LMAO, that was a good one!