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I really liked your fic, but that just may be because I'm so perverted.lease write more!!! Maybe Miroku and Kagome? (Ican't get enough of that couple)

I liked the story. I don't know why someone was so rude to you. That is why there is fanfiction, and Adult fan fiction.net so that we can allow our darkest and not so conventionally thoughts flow through, so, for the person who was so rude and called you sick, well, boo on them. This is a site for adult people hence the name AFF. Anyway, by the by, that was pretty tame as far as some that I have read or even written. Anyway, don't study them. Keep writing, and I will read.

I liked it the first time and I liked it the second time. What the heck was so sick about the story, the pairing hell no. There wasn't anything sick about the story heck compared to some of the stuff on this is pg-13. Though I love the story and the author. Why haven't I seen much from you lately. Please the world needs more of your stories. I need more of your stories. Anyway nice work.

When I said compared to some of the stuff on this is pg-13, I meant compared some to of the stuff on THIS SITE this is pg-13.

hehe, that was...cute, really good.

Absolutly loved your story. It captured alot of the character's true nature and even some raw emotion (especially during the night scene).

Hopefully there will be another chapter, cant wait to see it.

well.... let me say that you have an interesting imagination. but the story does feel very rushed. I realize that the sex scene was the main forcus but for some people setting it up can have a huge effect on the scene it's self. If you had taken the time to flush it put a little better It would add to your story ten fold. Another thing is that some of the dialoging seemed to not quite fit. I may be analizing too much but with sango's tie to her father and how deeply it wounded her when he died, she probalbly would shout "daddy" in any sexual situation. Nor do I think Inuyasha would call any woman a tramp, concidering he was raised but his mother and one can tell he holds woman in high respect. (i do understand that their inhabitions were substanderd.) . Those were the only things I found note worthy. Keep writing. You're good

Talia

I think anyone who likes this is depraved and sick and needs mental help. This is a disgrace to the show and you are an awful writer... do us all a favor to people like me who post the TRUTH.. and dont write again..

ok, first things first.^ up there, Kikyo Sagara or something? Just why are you upset to the point to try and stop someone from writing? I can just guess. You don't like the Inuyasha/Sango pairing or something. You think he should be with Kikyo or Kagome. In that case, don't read the fic, and go back to the never ending chain of cannon pairings. Because the more creative minds like alternatives; not just being confined to cannon.

This story is fn awesome, keep up the good work and cant wait for the next chapter