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June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Steamy chapter. I can not wait what the next chapter will entails. Update soon.
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May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Rin should be meeting a foster father again really soon....I wonder how things work themselves out.....I wait until the next chapter...update when you can.....
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May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am intrigued and can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work. You should probably go professional. I'd buy your books if you did. LOLz.
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May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Can I be like you when I grow up??? I enjoyed it... but you need to make longer chapters. But that's just what I think. JA!!!!
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May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOVE THE FANFICTION BIG TIME!!!!!!! I WONDER WHAT WILL HAPPEN WHEN EVERYONE FINDS OUT RIN IS TRYING TO KILL THEM. INTERESTING. PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!!!!!!!!
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May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
man do i love your story
i keep waiting for an update but i see that they come about once a month
wish they could be every week :)
have i mentioned i love your story
if i could request or maybe offer an idea in case u don't have your chapters made yet
if you could possibly have a fight scene where rin can kick some ass
i know u mentioned that she is some great demon slayer but i would like to read where maybe she goes
into town one night to get rid of some stress and she comes upon maybe a demon that is breaking the law or something i dont know and have rin kill it
or maybe
a fight scene between her and sessh in a battle for dominance if u catch my drift
ps. i love your story wish u cold update more often
i keep waiting for an update but i see that they come about once a month
wish they could be every week :)
have i mentioned i love your story
if i could request or maybe offer an idea in case u don't have your chapters made yet
if you could possibly have a fight scene where rin can kick some ass
i know u mentioned that she is some great demon slayer but i would like to read where maybe she goes
into town one night to get rid of some stress and she comes upon maybe a demon that is breaking the law or something i dont know and have rin kill it
or maybe
a fight scene between her and sessh in a battle for dominance if u catch my drift
ps. i love your story wish u cold update more often
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May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
whoa! good chapter! :D lemons are love!
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May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoo, hot chapter 10! I've been reading the story for a while, and this is my first time reviewing it. Fun story, good writing, and an interesting plot. Can't wait for the next chapter! ^_^
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May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Semper Fi
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May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT....LOVE IT....LOVE IT!!!!!!!! Finally, a few juicy minutes for Rin and Sesshomaru......isn't it amazing what a few months will do???? I can't wait to see how things take off ..now that Sesshomaru plans to make Rin his...and she is having a world of confusion........ like I said before and will continue to say, I love your story...please keep it coming.......