rate_review Reviews

Your story is really good and cute. But you should grammer and spell check your story. There were a lot of errors.

i loved it make more sango one shots

Sweet

Make more and fast i am in love with this type of stuff. I just love sango

Well the plot sounds OK, but there are lots of spelling errors & such in just the 1st paragraph, princes means more than one so it would be princes [insert 2 names here] or prince name & prince name. Some more things I noticed is raped [forced sex] where I think you meant wraped & Kagome's not a monk unless she got a sex change, monks are male, mikos are female. I would definitely try to find a decent beta with at least a moderate grasp of English & grammar, etc. to go over this for you & fix all the goofs.

don't listen to anyone who gives you flames! I am so glad that some one put up a sango story. Keeping making more there great.

The last lemon could have been better and you might want to try spell check, okay? That would be wise.

i love stories about Snago and Sesshomaru or Naraku keep up the good work and update soon