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for Contracting Love

by XGirlRed

person DEEP SERENITY
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GOT TO CHAP 6 AND i'M LOVING THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!! AGAIN THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR MAKING THIS ORIGINAL IN THAT THEY ARE NOT FIGHTING BEING TOGETHER EVERY SINGLE STEP OF THE WAY, AND YOU SHOW THEM HAVING FUN

ALSO, NOT ONLY IS YOUR PLOT GOOD SO IS YOUR WRITING.
person Nilla Waffer
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you know I typically can't stand AU's, but this one is so well written! I really hope you keep at this and finish it because I really can't wait to see what happens at the reunion. I'm guessing that Miroku's gonna make her ex regret ever letting Sango go!
person Nessy
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think that "Lucy in the Sky with Diamonds" is supposed to reference the engagement ring and how Sango's got her head in the clouds because of it.

Great chapter! please updatr soon!
person Vivi
schedule May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How dare you curse your muse! *I'm* your muse! Jerk. :)

And now that that is out of my system...

Sorry, Ash, I know you've been after me to read this for weeks, but unlike some lucky people I know, I haven't graduated yet. Two more weeks, two more weeks...

But, hun, I absolutely love the story. You channeled all of the characters so well. LOL, and I love how Sango and Kagome's interactions sound suspciously like conversations we've had...And while Inuyasha is my favorite eye-candy, I must say that the way you describe Miroku makes me want to fan myself...often. Great job, hun. Keep it up.

And I want to apologize to all of your loyal fans for keeping you away from your computer so long. You guys have to understand, I haven't seen my bestest best friend in forever, so it's my fault that she hasn't updated because she's been visiting me. *But* she has some *very* nice surprises planned for you, so don't get too mad :)

Love ya, sis. Can't wait to read the next chapter!
~Vivienne
person Smarty-0016
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey there ;)
owwHHH! not updating for such a long time is really cruel of you! do you know that? in fact your story plays in my head and it starts over and over again! soooooo
please update.
have i forgotten something? ...?
i don't need to tell you that your story is the best because you probably know!
bye
person Smarty-0016
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey here i am again. so what else cold i say than wow. chap 8 is fantastic with this council-thing you rubbed the mood high and especially the tension. i loves the moment when miroku called sango and said how sexy she is, you've done a goog job with this scene. i hope you'll update soon.
person Sakura Fubuki
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Argggg!
I know you have lots of stuff to do and you're sooo busy.
But please update...I won't say 'soon' because that's insensible.
I don't want to make you feel like you have to write when you don't want to.
But please do know that there are people like me out there dying to know
what will happen next. Please continue...
person sterlingwings900
schedule April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
u are so bad, leavin me hangin there like that! I STILL LOVE IT THOUGH! UPDATE PLEASE! heh, the sexual tension between them is getting thick but one thinks that their feelings will get hurt if they did have sex and the other thinks that they're not perfect enough to do it. i love it, keep it up and i'll be waiting!
person drake220
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update!! hurray! poor sango, she's so confused! lord, i hope miroku doesn't go out with someone else b/c sango will see and all her issues will come flying back adn smack miroku on the head. hard.
person Rawben (aka anon alot...but not always...wonder how long this \'name\' category goes on till...)
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yey for updates!!!! :D it was ok.. but kinda a filler chapter. oh! and you have to have a inu/kag lemon! come on!! you know you wanna! all the other kids are doin it! ;)