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for Contracting Love

by XGirlRed

person aff lover
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey, y'know, ch9's title, the beatles song "Lucy in the Sky with Diamonds" is code for LSD. I opened up the chapter expecting to read about some crazy trip that sango and miroku had but then...total 180 lets get married! And not that its a bad thing, and I totallly understand how the title does work, just wanted to let you know it was confusing. But good work! update soon!
person quirkyslayer
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! I'm really enjoying this fic! Please keep up the good work. You're an excellent writer.
person gina
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i'm so glad i found your fan fic is amazing.. i love it!!! i can't wai to see what happens.. they have to get together.. !!! please.. or i will cry well maybe not.. but it's the best miroku sango fic i have ever read!!!!!!!!!!! ok i'll go now.. =)
person sterlingwings900
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! YES! *jumps up and down* yay! you call that a short chapter? that was a perfect size! i love this chapter and i escpially cant wait for the next one! YOU WONT LEAVE ME IN SUSPENSE WILL YOU? ILL HUNT YOU DOWN AND WATCH YOU TYPE UP THIS STORY UNTIL ITS FINISHED! PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!
person drake220
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aw, sweetness! i liked this! it was cute!!
person DEEP SERENITY
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
loved the first chapter!!!!!!!!!!!! Love stories that don't have them fighting constantly or her slapping him everyother paragraph, I hope the rest of the chapters do it justice
person sakepolitan
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter...abit unexpected, but I'm excited to see how this will turn out. Keep writing I LOOOOVE this story!

btw: just in case you didn't know, the title (Lucy in the Sky with Diamonds), or the song I should say, is about LSD, might want to change the title cause it kinda threw me off.

keep up the good work!
person quirkyslayer
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I'm only on the first chapter and I'm hooked. This is a creative idea, and it really drew me in. I can't wait to read more. Good work.
person Sakura Fubuki
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man, I was about to give up on you.
Thanks for continuing! Love the latest chapter.
I don't usually read sugarly fictions, but this one's done quite well.
Looove Miroku that you've created*lick my lips*
person Rawben
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:( that was a short chapter! lol, but i look forward to the next one! lime? promise? ;) also, as you prolly already know, you have a formatting problem. all your apostropes (sp??) are question marks.... i feel like ron burgandy... ;) update soon!!!!