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December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hex you should really continue with this story it sounds good so far
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March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was good, but you may want to flesh these ideas out more. You have alot of potential here. For example:
1. How did Inuyasha react to Kagome being pregnant? Lots of humor potential here.
2. How did the defeat of naraku affect Inuyasha and Kagome?
3. Did they have any other adventures during this time?
Those are just a few ideas for you to go on. Once you elaborate a bit more or add more, it has the potential to be a funny story...or serious, whichever you prefer.
1. How did Inuyasha react to Kagome being pregnant? Lots of humor potential here.
2. How did the defeat of naraku affect Inuyasha and Kagome?
3. Did they have any other adventures during this time?
Those are just a few ideas for you to go on. Once you elaborate a bit more or add more, it has the potential to be a funny story...or serious, whichever you prefer.