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for Belonging Together

by inufan625

person smurfsicle
schedule April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW!, your story made me laugh, cry, and beg for more, I absolutely LOVED it! *Standing Ovation* You are a very good wiriter, my compliments.
person Nicolle
schedule March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update soon! This story is awesome. You've gone so far beyond the scope of the original characters, but at the same time, they're still undoubtedly themselves. I love it!
person Don\'t worry about it
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is really good. I know that sounds ridiculously simplistic, but it's really damn good. In fact the only problem with this story is that after reading it it's exceptionally hard to find something that doesn't seem incredibly mediocre. Congrats.


P.S. if you get a bunch of blank reviews from me sorry, my browser has this thing where it doesn't like me, anyway...Congrats again.
person queen bean
schedule March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more...must have more...please post soon!
person FayeMegan
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahh how can you leave it off there! eep I hope Kagome ill be ok!
schedule March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you are spelling the names right. if you have ever watched the japanese eps thats how they spell it i figured id give ya a heads up
person queen bean
schedule March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is sooo cool! i was hoping she would have twins! but please please please don't let kagome die
person queen bean
schedule March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really love your story! your characters act just as they would, i think, in the anime. and i love plot so far. Plus, so far it has not been a completely smooth ride for anyone, but i really hope that there is a happy ending! please keep writing and post often so i can see how the story ends. I can't wait for the next chapter - when will it be out?
person battousai69
schedule March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed reading this fic. The plot was interesting and I liked the writing style. I love happy endings!
person andross
schedule March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
your story is.............. AWSOME I LOVE THIS and you wrote so many chapters in such a short time.!!!