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March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Sesshoumaru smiles trimumphantly and bows* yes yes Sesshy, you did amazingly, AND that suit you were wearing was hot. *winks at Sesshoumaru who stoicly smiles* (hehe, i was at first so happy he came into the story, and then when he allowed Kagome to live with Inuyasha i verbally yelled "YES!"...just SO glad nobody was home ~_^)
so yeah, really good chappie. Man, Kagome is brave. i would have pulled the covers over my head long before she (or rather Inuyasha did for her) did. Plus, you updating so quickly completely rocks. good job! muahah but a side comment... your story is REALLY good, so could u please make longer chapters?! *tears up* its so cruel to get us into the story then have it suddenly end if you know what i mean ~_^
~Anime Fan~
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so yeah, really good chappie. Man, Kagome is brave. i would have pulled the covers over my head long before she (or rather Inuyasha did for her) did. Plus, you updating so quickly completely rocks. good job! muahah but a side comment... your story is REALLY good, so could u please make longer chapters?! *tears up* its so cruel to get us into the story then have it suddenly end if you know what i mean ~_^
~Anime Fan~
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March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lovin yo quizzes, plz keep continuin, I suck at ideas and crap so lol, hurry up!
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March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
verry good at first i thought you were moving kinda fast but now i relize you'r just cuting out the boring parts any way i realy like it update soon
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March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dont stop keep up with the writing...UPDATE AS SOON AS POSIBLE!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!
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March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
write longer ch. Please...
lov the story
lov the story
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March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it. So since her family's dead and she has no where to go. Is she going to move in w/ him? Well I can't wait to find out. UDPATE SOON!
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March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey not bad. It's short, but major twist. I give you a ten outta ten. Update soon. EK!
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March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Make the chapters longer. there abit boring ATM
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March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(Gomen if this has been posted a few times. i was having trouble posting it)*Sesshoumaru tears up and sniffles* "aaww. are you crying Sesshy?" *Sesshoumaru shakes head* "it is just a cold, Anime Fan" "ah hu...suuuure it is" *rolls eyes* so yeah.... great chappie
when the police came to the door i thought that they had founf out about their relationship, and came to 'queststion' her about being a minor and all. and i was like "crap, the jig is up!" and then she would have had to dump him...and the story would have ended...and i would have had to sick Sesshoumaru on you "oh, btw Sesshy, you can put away that poison whip. it was a false alarm...down boy!" *Sesshoumaru frowns, but nodds*
oh, and thanks so much for the acknowledgement. but really, it was only a passing thought, you were the genius of the story to put it in writing. so you didnt have to. but thanks anyways!! ^_^ (oh, and another thanks for reviewing one of my stories. thats cool)
anyways, Sesshoumaru is back at his post, now that he has stopped crying "i was not crying!" "suuuure" *rolls eyes and whipsers :yeah he was. it was sad* *growl from Sesshoumaru* hehe...so yeah! get back to work! and update soon! *smile*
~Anime Fan~
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when the police came to the door i thought that they had founf out about their relationship, and came to 'queststion' her about being a minor and all. and i was like "crap, the jig is up!" and then she would have had to dump him...and the story would have ended...and i would have had to sick Sesshoumaru on you "oh, btw Sesshy, you can put away that poison whip. it was a false alarm...down boy!" *Sesshoumaru frowns, but nodds*
oh, and thanks so much for the acknowledgement. but really, it was only a passing thought, you were the genius of the story to put it in writing. so you didnt have to. but thanks anyways!! ^_^ (oh, and another thanks for reviewing one of my stories. thats cool)
anyways, Sesshoumaru is back at his post, now that he has stopped crying "i was not crying!" "suuuure" *rolls eyes and whipsers :yeah he was. it was sad* *growl from Sesshoumaru* hehe...so yeah! get back to work! and update soon! *smile*
~Anime Fan~
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March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED IT!!! its about time that happened! its always "and they had sex..." its never realisitic. and if she does stop him...he gets all pissy, and breaks up with her. or its him who stops it, making her a slut. very good!!!! what do you think Sesshoumaru? *Sesshoumaru leans down and whispers response into Anime Fan's ear* Ah!, he says its unusual for his baka braother to be kind... but just ignore Sesshoumaru. I LOVED IT!!!
hehe, anyways... about what should happen next, i was thinking, somebody sees them? like... he comes over to her place the next day, they are kissing on the porch and Yuri sees them. or she had to move in with him, cuz while her family is away they end up in a car crash... get them in some sort of drama where they need each other.!!! *Sesshoumaru nudges Anime fan, and glares at her* ooo, riiiiight. and get your faithful guard,...i mean, inspiration, in the story. Sesshoumaru wouldnt mind a piece of the action... Prinicpal? the one that finds them? he'll take anything! ;)
~Anime Fan~
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hehe, anyways... about what should happen next, i was thinking, somebody sees them? like... he comes over to her place the next day, they are kissing on the porch and Yuri sees them. or she had to move in with him, cuz while her family is away they end up in a car crash... get them in some sort of drama where they need each other.!!! *Sesshoumaru nudges Anime fan, and glares at her* ooo, riiiiight. and get your faithful guard,...i mean, inspiration, in the story. Sesshoumaru wouldnt mind a piece of the action... Prinicpal? the one that finds them? he'll take anything! ;)
~Anime Fan~
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